Hi Roman,
Thank you for your review.
Incorporated changes will show up in the -09 revision (will be published later
today) and are part of this PR:
https://github.com/desec-io/draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bootstrapping/pull/15
Details below.
On 5/12/24 23:43, Roman Danyliw via Datatracker wrote:
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Thank you to Peter Yee for the GENART review.
** Section 6. Editorial.
The level of rigor in Section 4.2 is needed to prevent publication of
a half-baked DS RRset
Is “half-baked DS RRset” a term-of-art? To improve readability, I recommend
not using an idiomatic expression.
Replaced with "ill-conceived".
** Section 7. Editorial. Per the reference to
[draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bootstrapping], this should likely be something like
“[This RFC]” and subsequent comment of that string being replaced by the RFC
Editor.
Done.
** idnits reports:
** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 8499 (Obsoleted by RFC 9499)
Done.
Best,
Peter
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