Hi Paul,
On 2/28/25 20:05, Paul Wouters wrote:
Looks good, one minor suggestion:
NEW
This document generalizes and extends the use of DNS NOTIFY (RFC
1996) beyond conventional zone transfer hints, to allow triggering
other types of actions via the DNS that were previously lacking a
trigger mechanism. Notifications merely nudge the receiver to
initiate the desired action promptly (instead of on a schedule); they
do not alter the action itself (including any security checks it
might employ).
Instead of “desired”, I would use “predefined” or “preconfigured”, to make it
more clear this is not the “sender’s desired operation” but the receivers
preconfigured operation.
Good point; it's now "a predefined action".
I've also made a slight change to the new Security Considerations paragraph to
fix an editorial redundancy. The fixup is here:
https://github.com/peterthomassen/draft-ietf-dnsop-generalized-notify/pull/39/commits/e3d791d189876248a3fb885503b96b91a2d547ec
Nice to see this converge!
Best,
Peter + co-authors
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