Moin,

Thank you for your detailed review.

> 1. It is too bad that the referenced document for [DNSFlagDay2020]
> has an invalid certificate.

Thank you for noticing that. I reached out and asked whether the
certificate can be renewed.

> 2. The two references to this document also use “following
> [DNSFlagDay2020]” and the “following” is a bit confusing without
> reviewing the reference given that following is also time based and
> the reference might be interpreted as a date reference rather than
> informational as to why the EDNS(0) size is recommended. Perhaps use
> “as per” or some other text?

The text is adjusted as you suggested in this PR:
https://github.com/ietf-wg-dnsop/draft-ietf-dnsop-3901bis/pull/63

Could you please check and see if this addresses your concern?

> While the document is close, please see Geoff Huston’s DNSDIR review
> comments as he did a thorough job and no need to repeat some of the
> same issues I found.

I hear you echoing all issues from the DNSDIR review.

I would appreciate it if you could review the response to the review in
[email protected], and provide
feedback on whether the implemented changes/PRs and explanations there
address the concerns you have voiced.

Feedback would be highly appreciated.


With best regards,
Tobias

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