Mike Bishop has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-dnsop-ds-automation-08: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-ds-automation/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- # IESG review of draft-ietf-dnsop-ds-automation-06 CC @MikeBishop ## Comments I support Andy's and Roman's feedback about the use of BCP14 keywords. ## Nits All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose to address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you did with these suggestions. ### URLs These URLs in the document can probably be converted to HTTPS: * http://www.iana.org/assignments/ds-rr-types ### Grammar/style #### Section 6.2.1, paragraph 3 ``` y the registrar (or the registry) themself, such a lock is not suitable for ^^^^^^^^ ``` Generally speaking, "themself" is only acceptable when referring to a singular entity (such as the singular usage of "they", which is the preferred pronoun for many non-binary people). If "themself" refers to a plural entity (such as "everybody", or the standard usage of "they"), you should use "themselves". If "the registrar" is being referenced impersonally, consider "itself." #### Section 7.2.2, paragraph 4 ``` DS update has occurred. * An exception from this rule is when the entire DS ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ``` Did you mean "exception to"? _______________________________________________ DNSOP mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
