Re-, 

I hear Ketan's point but other reviewers also appreciated that appendix. For 
example, Thomas shared this feedback [1]:

"The condensed guidance in Appendix A (Recommendations Overview) is a really 
nice addition."

I tend to suggest to keep it for convenience of having one single place to 
point to for the complete list of recos.

Cheers,
Med

[1] 
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-dnsop-ds-automation-05-genart-lc-fossati-2026-04-28/

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Peter Thomassen <[email protected]>
> Envoyé : jeudi 21 mai 2026 15:28
> À : Ketan Talaulikar <[email protected]>; The IESG
> <[email protected]>
> Cc : [email protected]; [email protected]; draft-ietf-dnsop-ds-
> [email protected]
> Objet : [iesg] Re: [DNSOP] Ketan Talaulikar's No Objection on
> draft-ietf-dnsop-ds-automation-08: (with COMMENT)
> 
> 
> Hi Ketan,
> 
> Thank you for your review! Please see below.
> 
> On 5/21/26 15:18, Ketan Talaulikar via Datatracker wrote:
> > ----------------------------------------------------------------
> > COMMENT:
> > ----------------------------------------------------------------
> >
> > Thanks to the authors and the WG for their work on this
> document. I
> > have a couple of comments to offer.
> >
> > 1) This is provided as a comment instead of a DISCUSS since I am
> not
> > familiar with this subject matter. I would request my fellow ADs
> and
> > the authors/WG to cross-check.
> >
> > Sec 6.1 says:
> > To secure ongoing operations, automated DS maintenance MUST NOT
> be
> > suspended based on a registrar update lock alone (such as EPP
> status
> > clientUpdateProhibited [RFC5731]). When performed by the
> registry,
> > automated DS maintenance MUST NOT be suspended based on a
> registry
> > update lock alone (such as EPP status serverUpdateProhibited
> [RFC5731]).
> >
> > Is this in sync with what is specified in RFC5731 (not just
> letter but
> > also spirit)? Or does it overrule that specification in the
> context of
> > DS operations? RFC5731 is an Internet Standard. I don't think
> this
> > document updates that, but well ... just checking!
> 
> This recommendation was developed in consultation with Scott
> Hollenbeck, who's the author of the RFC 5731, and does not update
> another RFC.
> 
> Here's the history if you'd like to trace it:
> https://fra01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2F
> mailarchive.ietf.org%2Farch%2Fbrowse%2Fdnsop%2F%3Fq%3Dlocks%2520ds
> -
> automation&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7C356cef4
> 76d854837b46a08deb73cc1ae%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7
> C0%7C639149668743511545%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOn
> RydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoy
> fQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=8XXXeWEw5YHnlipIOPfM53EQCH1F88Qtw4SIQS
> EqcIA%3D&reserved=0
> 
> > 2) Given that this is a BCP, I would suggest to remove Appendix
> A to
> > avoid duplication of the text. IMHO it is equally important for
> > readers to go through the analysis that is accompanying the
> > recommendations to grasp the full context. We have AI for
> summaries
> > ;-)
> 
> As there are many recommendations, it seemed useful to have an
> implementation overview for those who just want to work through it
> without deviating.
> 
> However, I see your point and appreciate the suggestion. I'm not
> sure where the consensus lies about that, and will make the change
> if other IESG (or DNSOP) members chime in.
> 
> Best,
> Peter

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