On Wed, 28 Apr 2004, JINMEI Tatuya / [ISO-2022-JP] [EMAIL PROTECTED]@C#:H wrote:
> >>>>> On Tue, 27 Apr 2004 17:26:23 +0300 (EEST), 
> >>>>> Pekka Savola <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> said:
> 
> > I've updated the text a bit, trying to make this clearer:
> 
> > http://www.netcore.fi/pekkas/ietf/temp/draft-ietf-dnsop-ipv6-dns-issues-06pre-diff.html
> > http://www.netcore.fi/pekkas/ietf/temp/draft-ietf-dnsop-ipv6-dns-issues-06pre.txt
> 
> > Please see if these reflect to what you had in mind; I'm hoping of
> > submitting this within a day.
> 
> From a quick check, I suspect you typed the keyboard too fast, because
> I could not understand the following part
> 
>    In other words, there are two kinds of additional data: the kind that
>    must be included (all RRsets) no matter what (an example of this is
>    below), and the kind which could be omitted in full or in part, but
>    could cause nonoptimal results (an example of this is in the next
>    section):
> 
>    child.example.com.  IN NS ns.child.example.com.
>    ns.child.example.com. IN A 192.0.2.1
>    ns.child.example.com. IN AAAA 2001:db8::Y
> 
> I'm even not sure if this is a complete set of paragraphs you intended
> to add...

Hmm.  I can find no problems with this.  What may be confusing is at 
the end I said next _section_, not next paragraph, and the example I 
quoted from you relates to the first case.

I tried to reword it for clarity:

=======
  In other words, there are two kinds of additional data:

   1.  "critical" additional data; this must be included (all the
       possible RRsets) in all scenarios, and

   2.  "courtesy" additional data; this could be sent in full, with only
       a few RRsets, or with no RRsets, and can be fetched separately as
       well.

   An example of the latter are A/AAAA records in conjunction of MX
   records as shown in the next section; an example of the former is
   shown below:

   child.example.com.  IN NS ns.child.example.com.
   ns.child.example.com. IN A 192.0.2.1
   ns.child.example.com. IN AAAA 2001:db8::Y

   In the case of too much additional data, [...]
=======

Is this better?

> Another minor nit:
> 
>    Additionally, to avoid the case where an application would not get an
>    address at all due to non-critical additional data being omitted, the
>    applications should be able to query the specific records of the
>    desired protocol, not just rely getting all the required RRsets in
>    the additional section.
> 
> I guess "rely getting" should actually be "rely on getting".

Yep.

-- 
Pekka Savola                 "You each name yourselves king, yet the
Netcore Oy                    kingdom bleeds."
Systems. Networks. Security. -- George R.R. Martin: A Clash of Kings



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