stas 02/04/15 22:15:56
Modified: src index_top.html
src/download config.cfg
src/help config.cfg
src/maillist config.cfg
src/outstanding config.cfg
Log:
grammar fixes, improved wording
Submitted by: "Jonathan M. Hollin" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
Revision Changes Path
1.4 +4 -4 modperl-docs/src/index_top.html
Index: index_top.html
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RCS file: /home/cvs/modperl-docs/src/index_top.html,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- index_top.html 16 Apr 2002 04:59:56 -0000 1.3
+++ index_top.html 16 Apr 2002 05:15:55 -0000 1.4
@@ -8,8 +8,8 @@
"mod_perl is more than CGI scripting on steroids. It is a whole new way to
create dynamic content by utilizing the full power of the Apache web server
to create stateful sessions, customized user authentication systems, smart
-proxies, and much more. Yet, magically, your old CGI scripts will continue
-to work, and work very fast indeed. With mod_perl you give up nothing, and
+proxies and much more. Yet, magically, your old CGI scripts will continue
+to work and work very fast indeed. With mod_perl you give up nothing and
gain so much!"
</blockquote>
<p class="quotation">
@@ -23,11 +23,11 @@
href="http://www.perl.org";>Perl</a> programming language and the <A
href="http://www.apache.org/";>Apache</a> HTTP server. You can use
Perl to <b>manage Apache</b>, <b>respond to requests for web
-pages</b>, and much more.</p>
+pages</b> and much more.</p>
<p>mod_perl gives you a persistent Perl interpreter embedded in your web
server. This lets you avoid the overhead of starting an external
-interpreter, and avoids the penalty of Perl start-up time, giving you
+interpreter and avoids the penalty of Perl start-up time, giving you
<b>super-fast dynamic content</b>.</p>
<p>As you'd expect from the Perl community, there are <b>hundreds of
1.4 +1 -1 modperl-docs/src/download/config.cfg
Index: config.cfg
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RCS file: /home/cvs/modperl-docs/src/download/config.cfg,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- config.cfg 25 Mar 2002 16:25:54 -0000 1.3
+++ config.cfg 16 Apr 2002 05:15:55 -0000 1.4
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
title => "Download",
abstract => <<EOB,
-Get Source and Binary mod_perl distributions and additional Perl Modules
+Get source and binary mod_perl distributions and additional Perl modules
EOB
# an ordered list pod files relative to $c{src}
1.2 +3 -3 modperl-docs/src/help/config.cfg
Index: config.cfg
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RCS file: /home/cvs/modperl-docs/src/help/config.cfg,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- config.cfg 13 Apr 2002 17:38:10 -0000 1.1
+++ config.cfg 16 Apr 2002 05:15:56 -0000 1.2
@@ -5,9 +5,9 @@
title => 'Getting Help',
abstract => <<EOB,
-Solve your mod_perl problems: with help of mod_perl mailing lists,
-mod_perl training company or a commercial support company. Find an ISP
-providing mod_perl services.
+Solve your mod_perl problems: with the help of the mod_perl mailing
+lists, a mod_perl training company or a commercial support
+company. Find an ISP providing mod_perl services.
EOB
body => {
1.4 +24 -22 modperl-docs/src/maillist/config.cfg
Index: config.cfg
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RCS file: /home/cvs/modperl-docs/src/maillist/config.cfg,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- config.cfg 13 Apr 2002 17:26:51 -0000 1.3
+++ config.cfg 16 Apr 2002 05:15:56 -0000 1.4
@@ -1,29 +1,31 @@
use vars qw(@c);
@c = (
- id => 'maillist',
+ id => 'maillist',
- title => "Mailing Lists",
+ title => "Mailing Lists",
- abstract => "mod_perl and related projects mailing lists",
+ abstract => <<EOB,
+mod_perl and related projects' mailing lists.
+EOB
- # an ordered list pod files relative to $c{src}
- # the order is important for a correct placing of the chapters
- chapters => [
- qw(
- list-modperl.pod
- list-docs-dev.pod
- list-docs-cvs.pod
- list-dev.pod
- list-cvs.pod
- list-test-dev.pod
- list-test-cvs.pod
- list-announce.pod
- list-advocacy.pod
- list-embperl.pod
- list-asp.pod
- email-etiquette.pod
- contact.pod
- )
- ],
+ # an ordered list pod files relative to $c{src}
+ # the order is important for a correct placing of the chapters
+ chapters => [
+ qw(
+ list-modperl.pod
+ list-docs-dev.pod
+ list-docs-cvs.pod
+ list-dev.pod
+ list-cvs.pod
+ list-test-dev.pod
+ list-test-cvs.pod
+ list-announce.pod
+ list-advocacy.pod
+ list-embperl.pod
+ list-asp.pod
+ email-etiquette.pod
+ contact.pod
+ )
+ ],
);
1.2 +3 -2 modperl-docs/src/outstanding/config.cfg
Index: config.cfg
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RCS file: /home/cvs/modperl-docs/src/outstanding/config.cfg,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- config.cfg 13 Apr 2002 17:42:10 -0000 1.1
+++ config.cfg 16 Apr 2002 05:15:56 -0000 1.2
@@ -5,8 +5,9 @@
title => "Technologie Extraordinaire",
abstract => <<EOB,
-We have lots of great success reports from people using mod_perl,
-including world-wide statistics no mod_perl usage.
+Mod_perl is the power behind many of the Internet's busiest and most
+advanced web sites. Listed here are success stories from people using
+mod_perl; also, world-wide statistics of mod_perl usage
EOB
chapters => ['sites.html'],
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