Re: http://perl.apache.org/preview/modperl-docs/dst_html/index.html
A comma (,) should never precede the word "and". The paragraph: Technologie Extraordinaire We have lots of great success reports from people using mod_perl, including world-wide statistics no mod_perl usage. should read: Technologie Extraordinaire We have lots of great success stories from people using mod_perl, including world-wide statistics on mod_perl usage. The paragraph: Download Get Source and Binary mod_perl distributions and additional Perl Modules has capitalisation overdone (IMHO): Download Get source and binary mod_perl distributions and additional Perl modules The paragraph: Getting Help Solve your mod_perl problems: with help of mod_perl mailing lists, mod_perl training company or a commercial support company. Find an ISP providing mod_perl services. should read: Getting Help Solve your mod_perl problems: with the help of the mod_perl mailing lists, a mod_perl training company or a commercial support company. Find an ISP providing mod_perl services. The paragraph: Mailing Lists mod_perl and related projects mailing lists "projects" has ownership over "mailing lists" in this context so: Mailing Lists mod_perl and related projects' mailing lists or Mailing Lists mod_perl and related project mailing lists I'll post more as I find them. Jonathan M. Hollin - WYPUG Co-ordinator West Yorkshire Perl User Group http://wypug.pm.org/ http://wypug.digital-word.com/ --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] For additional commands, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
