Philip M. Gollucci wrote:
At the very least this one below. I think the whole first sentence (or attempt at rather) needs rewording. I believe correct english wold be ";therefore"

I best guess is split it to at least 2 sentences, but not quite sure what wording would be good.

Thanks Philip, fixed.

[ttyp5] [EMAIL PROTECTED] /home/philip/Developement/src/modperl-docs/src/outstanding rv=1 45 >cvs diff -u sites.html
Index: sites.html
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RCS file: /home/cvspublic/modperl-docs/src/outstanding/sites.html,v
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<p>
Also remember that many services are using mod_perl as their
back-end, therefore these aren't reported by Netcraft, since the
-back-ends are usually cannot be accessed by the Netcraft scanner. For
+back-ends usually cannot be accessed by the Netcraft scanner. For
the same reason, if you try to verify whether some of the services
listed here are running mod_perl, you may not be able to, because the
back-end is not accessible. The listing is made of reports from people


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