Jyothi, sorry that I'm late in getting to this, but here are some inputs. (FYI:
I was working from the doc on
http://dlc.sun.com/osol/docs/content/2009.06/IMGPACKAGESYS/.)
* Update Manager section.
It reads funny to say
"complete documentation for the Update Manager is
available in the Help menu of the Package Manager application."
I know it's true, but I do read it twice to make sure I'm getting it. Guess
this isn't really a doc issue, but does make me ask, why isn't there a help
option on Update Manager?
* Installing and Managing Packages - I like the list of "how to" things you
can do with IPS commands.
* Learning about IPS - I like the separation of user and developer tasks. I
would like to see this more clearly spelled out at the chapter level. Is there
any way to do that? It sure would make it more straightforward to find the
information I might need if I were wearing one user hat over another.
* Why Should You Create an Image" - In the following sentence, drop the s in
"images."
An images can be one of these types:
* Why Should You Create an Image - Unfortunately, after reading this section, I
couldn't answer that question.
* Actions in IPS
- I wasn't sure why I should care about this, although I'm sure there
is a reason.
- In the table in Driver row, remove one "T" in "TThe."
* pkg(1) Command Reference - Seems odd that chapter 10 title and first section
have the same name. Can they be combined into one page?
* Accessing a Windows Server from OSOL 2009.06 - while this seems like
interesting info, why is it in the IPS document? What's the specific relevance
to IPS?
* General comment - I noticed that some procedures said to become "superuser,"
while others said to become "root." Should these be standardized? And others
use "pfexec."
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