Thanks for the comments, Amit. I agree that more introductory BE info is required. I will update accordingly.
Thanks, Jyothi Amit k. Saha wrote: >Hi Jyothi, > >On Fri, Oct 17, 2008 at 8:35 PM, <Jyothi.Srinath at sun.com> wrote: > > >>IPS and Indiana teams, >> >>The OpenSolaris 2008.11 Package Manager Online Help is now available for >>review. >> >>Note : Images and links may not display correctly. Names of buttons, >>interfaces and dialog boxes may change before the final version. >> >>The help will be available from the Package Manager menu in b100 or b101. >> >>Two ways to review : >> >>1. View the help document in pdf format : >> >>http://opensolaris.org/os/project/indiana/files/online_help.pdf >> >>But note that the markups visible from the desktop document browser >>(yelp), are not visible in pdf. >> >>2. View from yelp : >> >>Steps to do so are : >> >>1. Download the xml file. >> >>http://www.opensolaris.org/os/project/indiana/files/online_help.xml >> >>2. Run the following command on your OpenSolaris system to open the >>document : >> >>$ yelp <full_path_name_of_file/filename> >> >>Please send me your feedback and comments before 10/23. >> >>Thanks for taking the time to review! >> >> > >Just a minor thought: The section on "Manage Boot Environments" just >seems to coming _right into your face_. A slight introduction would be >good, perhaps as an introductory paragraph in the section- "Update All >Errors". > >Yes, I saw that there is a 'glossary' at the end. > >Best, >Amit > > -- Jyothi Srinath Technical Writer Solaris Developers Group 650-786-9830
