I have two suggestions for additional material, so far:

History: There would be a special need to define terms, in this type of 
document. At least, the way I read the section, this type of document may cover 
new concepts, paradigms, etc.

Overview: Particularly in the scope of OpenSolaris (but also in Sun's media 
releases of Solaris), the author should be expected to explicitly document when 
feature X was made available. When was feature Y added? Command switch Z? ZFS 
is an example of this--older Open builds don't have it, the "official media" 
still doesn't. The coding of ls in regards to extended ACL's is still being 
hammered out.

Rainer
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