May as well put this post here, too... On pages 157 through 159, there are numerous mentions of various departments, meeting company editorial guidelines, managers, etc. The term "customer" is also used a few times, which should maybe become a generic "reader". (?)
Will OpenSolaris document contributors write BluePrints articles? Under Training Documents, there is this sentence: >These materials might include a student guide, an instructor guide, which >consists of the student guide plus additional notes, overheads, workbooks, and >studyguides. I would recommend removing the comma after "instructor guide", or rephrasing the statement (especially if I'm reading it incorrectly). It just seems a bit awkward. <shrug> Also, studyguides is choking the spell checker (no space). I'm thinking some of the categories under Other Training Documents (p.160) may not be applicable (like the TBT and WLC items), but I don't know. Perhaps the OpenSolaris site may be expanded in the future to allow these sorts of things? It could be an interesting idea, though it may conflict with a current revenue source for Sun. Sorry, Michelle, I had hoped to get to this area before you were prepping the next version of TSG, but I got pretty busy yesterday. Rainer This message posted from opensolaris.org
