On Mon, Sep 05, 2005 at 01:53:12PM +0100, Joe Orton wrote: > After getting bored with writing these into bugzilla for the umpteenth > time, does this look OK?
Looks good, just a few style/readability suggestions below. > + > +<p>To ensure that a core dump can be written to a directory which is I'd suggest this read "To ensure that the core dump is written to a directory which is" Otherwise, it seems tautological - the core dump can always be written to a directory which is writeable by the apache user. > +directive must be added to <code>httpd.conf</code>; for example:</p> > +size must be lifted; for example:</p> > +<p>On some platforms, further steps might be needed to enable core > +dumps; see <a href="#sol27">Solaris 2.7 and coredumps</a> below.</p> Semicolons are inappropriate here - try a dash, comma, or fullstop. > +<p>When a child process crashes, a message will be logged to the > +error_log like the following:</p> "like the following" should come immediately after "a message". Otherwise, it's unclear as to what will be like the following text - the message, or the error log. > +<p>if the text "possible coredump in /tmp" does not appear in the > +<p>if attempting to debug a threaded server, such as using the > +<p>this will produce a backtrace for each of the threads within the > +process.</p> I think these should start with capital letters - it just makes the text easier to read. Thanks! Noirin --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] For additional commands, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
