https://bz.apache.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=70119

            Bug ID: 70119
           Summary: HTTP/2 guide: “its RFC 9113”
           Product: Apache httpd-2
           Version: 2.5-HEAD
          Hardware: All
               URL: https://httpd.apache.org/docs/trunk/en/howto/http2.htm
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                OS: All
            Status: NEW
          Severity: trivial
          Priority: P4
         Component: Documentation
          Assignee: [email protected]
          Reporter: [email protected]
  Target Milestone: ---

The “The HTTP/2 protocol” section of the “HTTP/2 guide” page contains:
> There has been a lot written about HTTP/2 and how it works. The most 
> normative is, of course, its RFC 9113 (which obsoletes the original RFC 7540).
> 
The part following the last comma has incorrect syntax, since “its” should
precede something countable, but “RFC 9113”, which means *the* RFC numbered
9113, can never have more than 1 instance.

I suggest either:
1. “its specification (RFC 9113)”
2. just “its RFC”

By the way, the list says “h2c is HTTP/2 over TCP”. That is not technically
incorrect, but presenting that as a definition is misleading, as the "h2c"
protocol identifier “describes a protocol that does not use TLS”.

🅭🄍: https://www.philippecloutier.com/Common+infrastructure+licensing#its

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