Hi,

Thanks for the feedback. Will start working on it.

Jaimon



----- Original Message -----
From: Jean Hollis Weber <jeanwe...@gmail.com>
To: LibreOffice Documentation <documentation@global.libreoffice.org>
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Sent: Thursday, June 16, 2011 2:45 AM
Subject: [libreoffice-documentation] Screenshot quality, Getting Started 
Chapter 1

The theme used has good, clear contrast and should print well. The
highlighted items where the text is white on a blue background are not
ideal, but okay IMO. 

Some minor problems found.
Figure 2: Arrow from "Click here are drag" label points in the wrong
direction and does not connect to the spot where the user should click.
The pic in the section on "Opening an existing document" has a similar
problem, with the arrow on the lower right pointing in the wrong
direction.

Figures 3 and 4: Label text is much too large (it was also too large on
the original). Figure 3: arrows are good (better than the original), but
do not actually point to the handles. Also, the picture should be
cropped on left and right to remove the excess white space.

Figure 6 needs to be cropped on right and bottom to remove excess white
space. Arrows should go FROM the "Visible icons" label TO the icons. 

--Jean


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