Hi :)
The 1st link look more like something you would find inside, perhaps just 
before the Preface? ... or perhaps on the back-cover?  I agree with Jean that 
it is tooo much info for the front cover.

For the 2nd link i preferred the 2nd set but didn't like the greyed-out icons 
at the bottom.  They would look better in colour.  I think it was an 
interesting idea to try out but i don't think it quite worked.  The 1st set in 
that 2nd link might be better if the icons were in 2 or 3 columns in the space 
under the heading of the guide.  At the moment they seem to be crowding in on 
the heading and distract attention away from the guides' heading.  

All looked like a lot of good work and interesting ideas.  Far beyond my skills 
but criticising is easier than doing.  I hope you are on the design team so 
they can benefit from your ideas and work too!

Many regards from
Tom :)  


--- On Sat, 16/6/12, Jean Weber <[email protected]> wrote:

From: Jean Weber <[email protected]>
Subject: Re: [libreoffice-documentation] Cover design for documentation - Back 
side
To: [email protected]
Date: Saturday, 16 June, 2012, 12:01

On Sat, May 26, 2012 at 7:16 PM, klaus-jürgen weghorn ol
<[email protected]> wrote:
> Hi all,
> reworking on an old subject:
> I started to make a back of our documentation following our front design.
> I did this for the German versions [1] and now I do it for the international
> versions [2].
>
> There are some first items:
> - of course: my English and Google's translation ;-). So the text needs to
> be controlled and changed (especially "About LibreOffice").
> - the content of "About LibreOffice" should be as high as the module bar as
> you can see on my German proposals.
>
> [1]
> https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/User:K-j/Drafts/Design/Front-Guide#R.C3.BCckseite_unserer_Handb.C3.BCcher
>
> [2]
> https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/User:K-j/Drafts/Design/Front-Guide#Back_of_international_documentation
>
> BCCing Drew Jensen, working for the fronts, because I don't know if he reads
> this ml.
>
> --
> Grüße
> k-j
>

Sorry to have taken so very long to get back to this topic. I've now
downloaded your samples, which I quite like but for two things:
1) To me they look a bit cluttered or "busy".
2) Of more practical importance, no space has been left at the bottom
for an ISBN. So they are good for the free PDFs but will need some
modification for the printed books.

I will try to find some time soon to make a proposal for some modifications.

I also note your request for modification of the English. That part
should be easy for me, at least. :-)

--Jean

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