Peter, Here is the chapter file containing my minor updates. Change tracking was on. Over to you for any more substantial updates arising from Hazel's edit. http://www.odfauthors.org/libreoffice/english/getting-started/published-lo-3.6/gs3.5-ch7-draw/view
--Jean On Wed, Sep 19, 2012 at 9:58 AM, Jean Weber <[email protected]> wrote: > Peter, > I made a few (relatively minor) changes to this chapter in the full > book, but have not yet taken those changes into the chapter file. One > change, made mainly for consistency with the rest of the book, is to > remove many of the references to figure numbers, when the figure > immediately follows the text. Other changes were minor wording changes > that I happened to spot; I didn't read the chapter carefully as Hazel > has now done. > > I plan to update the chapter file with my changes and can also do some > of those Hazel has identified, and then put the file into Feedback. > You can then address Hazel's more substantive topics on your next > update. > > --Jean > > On Wed, Sep 19, 2012 at 4:19 AM, Hazel Russman > <[email protected]> wrote: >> Quite a few errors here, I'm afraid. >> >> p.183. "Pages pane" (twice). It's actually called Page Pane. >> >> p.191. "To only format..." should be "To format only..." >> >> p.198. Slanting an object. The word "shear" is used at one point (and >> also in Fig 194). I think this is confusing; it ought to be the same >> word throughout. >> >> p.203. "...high zoom values that are practical for your display." What >> does that mean? The *highest* value that is available? >> Displaying the grid. "...click on with..." should be "...click on..." >> >> p.204. "To turn on or off the help lines..." should be "To turn the >> help lines on or off..." >> >> p.206. Figs 208 and 209 don't match. Fig 208 doesn't show any >> specifications for changing the colour. >> >> p.209. Last sentence does not make sense. >> >> p.210. "...this is a similar process used..." should be "...this is a >> similar >> >> -- >> H Russman >> -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [email protected] Problems? http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/documentation/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted
