I've uploaded my latest iteration. Some text and graphics still need improvement. PeterS said he would work on it. IMO it needs a fresh approach, and Peter is also able to produce good graphics. I think it's time we turn it over to him.
--Jean On Sat, Jun 22, 2013 at 10:12 PM, [email protected] <[email protected]> wrote: > Ok > > Football night tonight! so I've been able to go through this and make > amendments suggested. > > http://www.odfauthors.org/libreoffice/english/calc-guide/feedback-lo4/chapter-1-intro-to-calc/at_download/file > > Cheers > > Shelagh > > > On 22 June 2013 20:19, [email protected] <[email protected]> > wrote: >> >> Have downloaded your edits and will try to do your suggested edits. >> >> Cheers >> >> Shelagh >> >> >> On 15 June 2013 19:02, Jean Weber <[email protected]> wrote: >>> >>> On Sat, Jun 15, 2013 at 4:51 PM, [email protected] >>> <[email protected]> wrote: >>> > I have just uploaded Chapter 1 Introducing Calc to feedback. >>> > >>> > I have gone through and accepted most of the changes of the French >>> > team, >>> > added a couple of images. added Kieran's changes. Some of his >>> > suggestions >>> > had already been considered in previous comments by myself and Chris. >>> > >>> > >>> > http://www.odfauthors.org/libreoffice/english/calc-guide/feedback-lo4/cg403-introducing-calc/view >>> > >>> > Hope that last link is correct to go directly to the file. It doesn't >>> > look >>> > quite right. >>> > >>> > Cheers >>> > >>> > Shelagh >>> >>> >>> The direct link works. The filename is wrong (should be CG4001, not >>> CG403) but I'll fix that when I review it. >>> >>> Thanks! --Jean >> >> > -- To unsubscribe e-mail to: [email protected] Problems? http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/documentation/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted
