Hi, Dave, let me add, for Chapter 2, there is also this: - Open and Save As windows are not available as a setting in the Settings anymore; - MediaWiki extension is not available on macOS systems, should be mentioned somehow;
Lp, m. 2018-01-20 19:34 GMT+01:00 Martin Srebotnjak <mi...@filmsi.net>: > Hi, Dave, > > I am checking Slovenian translation for the existing versions of 6.0 > chapters and by going through chapters 0-3 I have the following remarks, > maybe it comes handy in the review process. > > Lp, m. > > * * * > > *All chapters* > > 1. > > Isn’t Mac OS X now officially »macOS«? Mostly in the keystroke > reference in the beginning of each chapter, but present in several places > in Chapter 1 (because there are a lot of references to OS in every > subchapter). > > > *Chapter 0* > > 1. > > Can previous authors (and actually authors of like 80 % of current > text) really be removed from the »Authors« table and referenced as authors > of previous versions in the »Acknowledgments« section? From the copyright > law and moral rights standpoint that seems not adequate to me. > 2. > > Ask.libreoffice.org is referenced twice in a row, first in the Help > System subchapter, then again 4 paragraphs later; is that necessary? > 3. > > Basic system requirements: Vista is not supported anymore, for macOS > the lowest supported version is now 10.9 (Mavericks), not 10.8 … > 4. > > Open and Save As windows by the system: according to release notes > (feature removal section) the system windows are still but option, but not > via Settings anymore (only as an expert configuration); > > > *Chapter 1* > > 1. > > LibreOffice Vanilla is not free anymore, needs rephrasing. > 2. > > QuickStarter, as stated on wiki LO60 Release Notes is still available > on Linux, so no changes to QuickStarter section should be made? > 3. > > Reference to picture no. 8 is text only, not an actual virtual > reference. > > > *Chapter 2* > > 1. > > Date of issue is not bumped to 2018, neither is the LO version (still > states 5.2). > > > *Chapter 3* > No remarks so far. > > 2018-01-19 22:00 GMT+01:00 Dave Barton <libreoffice...@tasit.net>: > >> Hi Folks, >> >> Getting back on track following a problematic international move and a >> rotten bout of flu, although I am still battling to get a decent >> internet connection. >> >> I have now pulled copies of all existing chapter contributions in both >> the drafts and feedback folders from ODF Authors with the intention of >> reviewing, revising and collating them into potentially publishable >> book. This is going to be a sizable undertaking, so if any other members >> of the team can find the time assist please contact me on or off list. >> >> I will report to this thread as I complete chapters I consider ready for >> final review and or grammatical checking. >> >> An issue with the Template Changer Extension was reported: >> https://bugs.documentfoundation.org/show_bug.cgi?id=60592 >> The extension developer has now updated the extension from version 1.27c >> to 1.27d. My own tests with the latest version indicate it works as >> expected under LO 6.0RC2. I have updated Template Changer Extension on >> ODF Authors to this latest version: http://bit.ly/2Djt9i4 >> >> Regards >> Dave >> >> >> >> >> >> -- >> To unsubscribe e-mail to: documentation+unsubscribe@glob >> al.libreoffice.org >> Problems? https://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-un >> subscribe/ >> Posting guidelines + more: https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette >> List archive: https://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/documentation/ >> All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be >> deleted >> > > -- To unsubscribe e-mail to: documentation+unsubscr...@global.libreoffice.org Problems? https://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ Posting guidelines + more: https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: https://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/documentation/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted
