Hello Team, I've uploaded Chapter 4 to the Feedback folder (noted changes on the Status spreadsheet). Steve, I think many of your changes are cohesive and really enhanced the document's readability/directionality.
Cheers, Sam. Samantha Hamilton darling docs <https://darlingdocs.wordpress.com/> <https://github.com/samanthahamilton> <https://www.linkedin.com/in/shamilton-64b4b71b0/> On Thu, Aug 6, 2020 at 8:37 AM Felipe Viggiano <[email protected]> wrote: > Hello Steve, > > Thank you very much for the feedback! > > Regarding the bugs, I did a few actions to try to resolve it without > success, as I didn't want to delay the review even more, I decided to put > the warning in the comments. For now, I'm gonna look a little deeper in > those issues, and confirming that it's not some configuration issue I will > definitely report a bug. > > About the text in the Data labels dialog, I can see now how it is important > to alert the user. In this case, may I suggest inserting the text that you > wrote? It would be something like: > "If you selected a data series, Calc displays data labels for that data > series using default settings (and it will remain displayed even if you > press Cancel on the dialog)..." > > As for the commas, that was something I didn't know about. I will keep that > in mind in the next Calcs reviews, thanks for the heads up! > > Best regards, > Felipe Viggiano > > Em qui., 6 de ago. de 2020 às 04:56, Steve (GMail) < > [email protected]> escreveu: > > > Hi Felipe, > > > > Very many thanks for the useful comments on Chapter 3 – your help is > > much appreciated. It’s an over-sized chapter and you have obviously > > reviewed it thoroughly. > > > > I have processed your comments, accepting most, but modifying a few and > > rejecting a few. I have hopefully covered everything you raised, but > > with the document containing two sets of tracked changes, it’s sometimes > > hard to be sure! > > > > The file is now in the Draft folder awaiting second review. If you have > > time, feel free to look through the document and make sure that you are > > happy with my editorial decisions; please email if anything is amiss or > > not understood (probably better than making further edits yourself at > > this stage). > > > > A few notes on matters arising: > > Apart from the addition of your name to the list of contributors, I have > > ignored proposed formatting changes to the front matter pages, before > > the “Introduction” section. These pages will be overhauled when the 7.0 > > template is finalised and any changes now are nugatory. > > In the section entitled “Selecting non-adjacent data”, the step > > described in the second bullet point worked fine on my Windows system. > > If it doesn’t work on your OS, maybe you could consider raising a bug > > report in Bugzilla? > > Please could you look again at the change proposed to the first bullet > > under step 3 in the section entitled “Adding and formatting data labels > > for a data series”. The text as originally written describes the > > behaviour on my Windows system. In particular, I don’t want to lose the > > explanation that “...Calc displays data labels for that data series > > using default settings…” when a data series is selected (these data > > labels with default settings remain displayed even if you press Cancel > > on the Data Labels dialog). > > Step 3 in the section entitled “Removing all data labels” works for me. > > If it doesn’t work on your OS, maybe you could consider raising a bug > > report in Bugzilla? > > With regards to your inability to test the 3D View aspects because of > > crashes, have you considered raising a bug report in Bugzilla? > > With respect to Figure 51 (“Drawing toolbar when chart is placed in edit > > mode”). I suspect that the order of icons was changed at some point but > > no icons have been added or removed and so I think we can safely leave > > this figure as it is. (There is an overall caveat in the Preface to the > > Calc Guide to the effect that not every illustration will match exactly > > what each individual reader sees on his Calc screens). > > I note that you have commented in some places on the use of a comma > > before that last item in a list of “things”, and proposed deleting said > > comma. For those with a fascination with the English language (and > > plenty of time on their hands), this is known as a serial comma, or a > > series comma, or an Oxford comma, or a Harvard comma. You can read more > > at https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Serial_comma and linked pages. Suffice > > to say that we tend to use this extra comma throughout the Calc Guide > > (not my decision) and I don’t have any enthusiasm for re-working that > > decision at this stage. I have therefore rejected those particular > > changes. > > > > Thanks again, > > > > Steve > > > > > > ------ Original Message ------ > > From: "Felipe Viggiano" <[email protected]> > > To: "Documentation Team" <[email protected]> > > Sent: 05/08/2020 14:03:06 > > Subject: Re: [libreoffice-documentation] Re: Calc Guide v7.0 > > > > >Hello everyone, > > > > > >Just uploaded a first review on the CG7003-ChartsAndGraphs in the > Feedback > > >folder. Uploaded also a .zip file with some images to support a few > > >comments, please feel free do delete it after downloading. > > > > > >Checked out the CG7005 - UsingGraphics for a first review, expected > > >return by friday (07Ago2020). > > > > > >The Calc Status Guide spreadsheet has been updated. > > > > > >Best regards, > > >Felipe Viggiano > > > > > >Em ter., 4 de ago. de 2020 às 12:27, Samantha Hamilton < > > >[email protected]> escreveu: > > > > > >> Hi Steve, and docs team, > > >> > > >> I have taken the Calc Guide v7.0, Chapter 4 for first review. I > expect > > to > > >> have it in the feedback folder by Friday at the latest. > > >> > > >> Best, > > >> Sam. > > >> > > >> Samantha Hamilton > > >> darling docs > > >> > > >> <https://darlingdocs.wordpress.com/> < > > >>https://github.com/samanthahamilton> > > >> <https://www.linkedin.com/in/shamilton-64b4b71b0/> > > >> > > >> > > >> On Sat, Aug 1, 2020 at 4:26 PM Steve (GMail) < > > [email protected]> > > >> wrote: > > >> > > >> > > > >> > I have finished updating Chapter 4, Using Styles and Templates, and > > >> > placed the file in the Draft folder ready for first review. > > >> > > > >> > As with earlier chapters, please do not waste time reviewing the > > front > > >> > matter or the template used for this chapter (other than adding > your > > >> > name to the list of contributors of course!) > > >> > > > >> > Regards, > > >> > > > >> > Steve > > >> > > > >> > ------ Original Message ------ > > >> > From: "Steve (GMail)" <[email protected]> > > >> > To: "Documentation Team" <[email protected]> > > >> > Sent: 23/07/2020 20:28:44 > > >> > Subject: Calc Guide v7.0 > > >> > > > >> > >Hi All, > > >> > > > > >> > >I have started a detailed read through the chapters of the 6.4 > Calc > > >> > >Guide to identify the changes needed for 7.0. > > >> > > > > >> > >The first two chapters (0 - Preface and 1 - Introduction) have > been > > >> > >updated and placed in the appropriate Draft folder within > NextCloud. > > >> > >Please could somebody find time to perform a first review of these > > >> > >chapters? > > >> > > > > >> > >Echoing Peter Schofield's comments in relation to the Impress > Guide, > > >> > >please do not waste time reviewing the front matter or the > template > > >> > >used for these chapters (other than adding your name to the list > of > > >> > >contributors of course!). I will sort out these aspect prior to > > >> > >publication, once the 7.0 template is finalised. > > >> > > > > >> > >Regards and thanks, > > >> > > > > >> > >Steve Fanning > > >> > > > > >> > -- > > >> > To unsubscribe e-mail to: > > >>[email protected] > > >> > Problems? > > >> > > > https://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ > > >> > Posting guidelines + more: > > >>https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette > > >> > List archive: > > https://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/documentation/ > > >> > Privacy Policy: https://www.documentfoundation.org/privacy > > >> > > > >> > > >> -- > > >> To unsubscribe e-mail to: > > [email protected] > > >> Problems? > > >>https://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ > > >> Posting guidelines + more: > > https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette > > >> List archive: > > https://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/documentation/ > > >> Privacy Policy: https://www.documentfoundation.org/privacy > > >> > > > > > >-- > > >To unsubscribe e-mail to: > > [email protected] > > >Problems? > > https://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ > > >Posting guidelines + more: > https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette > > >List archive: > https://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/documentation/ > > >Privacy Policy: https://www.documentfoundation.org/privacy > > -- > > To unsubscribe e-mail to: > [email protected] > > Problems? > > https://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ > > Posting guidelines + more: > https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette > > List archive: https://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/documentation/ > > Privacy Policy: https://www.documentfoundation.org/privacy > > > > -- > To unsubscribe e-mail to: [email protected] > Problems? > https://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ > Posting guidelines + more: https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette > List archive: https://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/documentation/ > Privacy Policy: https://www.documentfoundation.org/privacy > -- To unsubscribe e-mail to: [email protected] Problems? https://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ Posting guidelines + more: https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: https://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/documentation/ Privacy Policy: https://www.documentfoundation.org/privacy
