Thank you for those comments.
With regards to the two general points:
1. “I note most of the figures used are not referenced in the text”.
This is the situation throughout the document and was inherited from the
previous issue. As we review and update chapters more fully (such as the
work we are doing for Chapters 1 and 2 at this update) then I am
ensuring that the figures are referenced in the text. For other
chapters, that update will have to wait until subsequent issues of the
document.
2. “What is the capitalisation guide for figure text?”.
Sentence-style capitalization is currently the norm in our guides.
I have addressed your other comments on Chapter 5 (Queries) and uploaded
the revised file to NextCloud.
Regards,
Steve
On 16/01/2022 12:43, flywire wrote:
These are comments in the vicinity of changes as I've skimmed chapters and
haven't followed the examples using Base (
https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Documentation/DocumentationTeamInfo/ProducingLibreOfficeUserGuides#What_to_look_for_in_an_update_or_review
).
It's good to see the document tone updated.
* BG7305-Queries_SF_12Jan2022.odt
- I note most of the figures used are not referenced in the text.
- What is the capitalisation guide for figure text?
- Paragraph after Figure 11 - *That* is normally a redundant word
- Figure 17 Count... prefer *shows* (used extensively in
guides) alternatively *calculates*
- Figure 19 - delete unexpectedly
- The paragraph under Figure 36 end of first sentence... as Figure 36
shows.
- Other changes read well
* BG7306-Reports_SF_14Jan2022.odt
- Changes read well
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