Thank you for the instructions Matthias. I pushed the changes I suggested earlier (the obvious stuff) along with some other corrections. I suggest others proof-read this document as well, as I still believe there are awkward and unclear sentences lurking in there.
On Sat, Mar 7, 2009 at 11:06 AM, Matthias-Christian Ott <[email protected]> wrote: > On Fri, Mar 06, 2009 at 06:21:41PM -0500, voltaic wrote: >> Hey Matthias, > > Hi, > >> That URL you mentioned has some simple typos in it. The page is not >> publicly editable, so I thought I'd let you know. The things that >> stick out at me right away are: > > Well, you can edit it. See http://www.suckless.org/wiki/ for further > details. > >> "proof" should be "prove" >> "Our project scopes focus on advanced" should be "...focuses on advanced" >> "projects who focus" should be "projects that focus" >> Need a comma after "average and normal end users" > > Thanks, very obvious. The comma seems reasonable. > >> I could go on, but editing that page over email is not the most >> efficient way of doing things. > > Just send me the diff or push it yourself. However, I'll take out my > grammar book and look for mistakes in the GSoC page. > > Could another native speaker (preferably British) look for mistakes > as well? > > Regards, > Matthias-Christian > >> On Fri, Mar 6, 2009 at 10:13 AM, Matthias-Christian Ott <[email protected]> >> wrote: >> > On Fri, Mar 06, 2009 at 03:02:17PM +0000, Anselm R Garbe wrote: >> >> Hi there, >> >> >> >> please send me a private mail if you'd be willing to mentor a GSoC >> >> project this year for suckless.org. >> >> We need at least 10 mentors I'd say. >> > >> > I also created a list of mentors: >> > >> > http://www.suckless.org:8000/gsoc.html >> > >> > You may add yourself to the list if Anselm agreed. >> > >> >> Kind regards, >> >> --Anselm >> > >> > Regards, >> > Matthias-Christian Ott >> > >> > >> > >
