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From: "Richard Bennett" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
<<< That looks good.
A few minor things: >>>
OK :)
<<< * This sentence:
[...]
Might read easier like this: >>>
changed it as per your suggestion
<<< * Most links open a new window except the compatibility matrix link. >>>
aligned it with the others (ie this link now also targets a new window)
<<< * I'm not so sure this sentence is such a good idea:
If you show commitment to submit patches regulary you have the chance to be picked up
as an official DynAPI developer and thereby given access to more profound areas of the
project managment. The project welecomes new developers, but they got to show the
commitment and spirit for the task beforehand in other than words.
It makes it sound a bit like a hacking-group, where you can gain access to secret
areas. >>>
I'm open to any change suggestions. i can't really say that's how it reads to me, nor
do I feel it is so far off ;)
<<< * my url is without capitals. >>>
check :)
<<< * Maybe a mention that people should get an account *before* they submit a
bug/patch, or at least sign their name. >>>
Well, the admins where pretty specific how they wanted this bit and Cameron edited it
as per their input as far as I can see, so I didn't want to interfere since I'm not
much involved in how this works anyway.
<<< * There are a few spelling mistakes, run the URL through http://www.siteowner.com/
to find them.>>>
I hope you don't fry my about the spelling, because as you might know, english isn't
my first language. I do try to do my best though I know I'm far from perfect on this,
so I greatly apprieate any help with this.
The resource link provided wasn't able to find any spelling mistakes though, and i
can't see any, but i'm pretty sure there'd might be some anyway - it would be great if
anybody are able to review it further and point them out for me.
<<< Nice job!
Richard >>>
thanks, you did a good job reviewing it too :)
Henrik Våglin [ [EMAIL PROTECTED] ]
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