On 11/09/18 16:09, Gao, Liming wrote: > Laszlo: > Can ';' be removed from below sentence? > > an announcement email is sent to the edk2-devel mailing list; by default by > Liming Gao. > > ==> > > an announcement email is sent to the edk2-devel mailing list by default by > Liming Gao.
Hmm I don't really like that, to me it makes the sentence a lot harder to read. How about this simplified version instead (i.e., drop "by default", and the semicolon): "an announcement email is sent to the edk2-devel mailing list by Liming Gao" ? Thanks! Laszlo > > Thanks > Liming >> -----Original Message----- >> From: Leif Lindholm [mailto:[email protected]] >> Sent: Friday, November 9, 2018 6:05 PM >> To: Laszlo Ersek <[email protected]> >> Cc: [email protected]; Andrew Fish <[email protected]>; Richardson, >> Brian <[email protected]>; Gao, Liming >> <[email protected]>; Kinney, Michael D <[email protected]>; >> Cetola, Stephano <[email protected]> >> Subject: Re: [edk2-wiki PATCH] release planning: announce the soft and hard >> feature freezes >> >> On Thu, Nov 08, 2018 at 06:28:07PM +0100, Laszlo Ersek wrote: >>> Add a paragraph to each of the SoftFeatureFreeze and HardFeatureFreeze >>> articles about the respective announcements on edk2-devel. >>> >>> Cc: Andrew Fish <[email protected]> >>> Cc: Brian Richardson <[email protected]> >>> Cc: Leif Lindholm <[email protected]> >>> Cc: Liming Gao <[email protected]> >>> Cc: Michael Kinney <[email protected]> >>> Cc: Stephano Cetola <[email protected]> >>> Contributed-under: TianoCore Contribution Agreement 1.1 >>> Signed-off-by: Laszlo Ersek <[email protected]> >> >> Reviewed-by: Leif Lindholm <[email protected]> >> >>> --- >>> >>> Notes: >>> Check out the rendered pages in my clone of the wiki: >>> >>> https://github.com/lersek/edk2/wiki/SoftFeatureFreeze >>> https://github.com/lersek/edk2/wiki/HardFeatureFreeze >>> >>> HardFeatureFreeze.md | 8 ++++++++ >>> SoftFeatureFreeze.md | 8 ++++++++ >>> 2 files changed, 16 insertions(+) >>> >>> diff --git a/HardFeatureFreeze.md b/HardFeatureFreeze.md >>> index 01288dd03f71..e08f4c047e8d 100644 >>> --- a/HardFeatureFreeze.md >>> +++ b/HardFeatureFreeze.md >>> @@ -4,3 +4,11 @@ tag](EDK-II#stable-tags). >>> >>> (This definition is modeled after QEMU's [hard feature >>> freeze](https://wiki.qemu.org/Planning/HardFeatureFreeze)). >>> + >>> +# Announcing the hard feature freeze >>> + >>> +The proposed schedule for the active development cycle is shown in the >>> [EDK II >>> +Release Planning](EDK-II-Release-Planning) article. Shortly before the hard >>> +feature freeze, an announcement email is sent to the >>> +[edk2-devel](https://lists.01.org/mailman/listinfo/edk2-devel) mailing >>> list; by >>> +default by [Liming Gao](https://github.com/lgao4/). >>> diff --git a/SoftFeatureFreeze.md b/SoftFeatureFreeze.md >>> index 9dc7d9c19369..e33dd80ccbee 100644 >>> --- a/SoftFeatureFreeze.md >>> +++ b/SoftFeatureFreeze.md >>> @@ -40,3 +40,11 @@ communicate with the maintainer about their intentions. >>> It also helps if you: >>> >>> (This definition is modeled after QEMU's [soft feature >>> freeze](https://wiki.qemu.org/Planning/SoftFeatureFreeze).) >>> + >>> +# Announcing the soft feature freeze >>> + >>> +The proposed schedule for the active development cycle is shown in the >>> [EDK II >>> +Release Planning](EDK-II-Release-Planning) article. Shortly before the soft >>> +feature freeze, an announcement email is sent to the >>> +[edk2-devel](https://lists.01.org/mailman/listinfo/edk2-devel) mailing >>> list; by >>> +default by [Liming Gao](https://github.com/lgao4/). >>> -- >>> 2.19.1.3.g30247aa5d201 >>> _______________________________________________ edk2-devel mailing list [email protected] https://lists.01.org/mailman/listinfo/edk2-devel
