Yeah, that sounds really odd, now that you mention it. I will be going through this and tweaking things like that, and I also think the "problem" slides can be condensed. I go through them pretty quickly anyway.
On Fri, Jun 18, 2010 at 2:57 PM, Inderrieden, Edward B < [email protected]> wrote: > I think it looks good. If you need time, I think you can reduce the > beginning 11 slides to a review and be done with it (this is just a > suggestion if you are looking to cut). Your heading on slides 11 and 12, > “History: the solution” has an odd ring to it. Perhaps “Proposed solutions”? > “Early solutions”? I do understand you are coming from “History: The > Problem”. Perhaps it is the “History” party this is bothering me. Maybe just > “The Problem” and “Early Solutions” might be better. > > > > *From:* [email protected] [mailto: > [email protected]] *On Behalf Of *Phillip Moore > *Sent:* Friday, June 18, 2010 1:45 PM > > *To:* EFS core development list > *Subject:* Re: [EFS-dev] YAPC::NA 2010 EFS Talk Draft > > > > Here's that latest draft. I just ran through this entire thing, and it > took me 32 minutes. > > This incorporates most of the changes you all suggested. > > > > On Thu, Jun 17, 2010 at 6:21 PM, Phillip Moore <[email protected]> > wrote: > > ALL of the suggestions you all made are excellent. I am going to make an > attempt to fit them all into the talk, and then do a dry run tomorrow to see > how long it works out to be. I'll have another draft by EOB tomorrow. > > > > The real problems is that there's too many cool things about EFS for a 40 > minute talk, but I'll do my best. I have to avoid (a) too many tangents and > funny stories, and (b) talking too damn fast. > > > > On Wed, Jun 16, 2010 at 2:35 PM, Phillip Moore <[email protected]> > wrote: > > Here's the draft of the talk for next week. As usual, compressing > everything EFS is and does into a 40 minute talk isn't easy. > > > > I'm going to spend some more time on this on Friday, and probably do some > last minute tweaking next week. > > > > I think that rather than more detail about how EFS works, a couple of real > world use cases would be helpful. I'm thinking about a couple of slides > about how gcc is integrated will be interesting, as well as a couple that > show how EFS itself is managed out of /efs/dist, in particular how we use > releasealiases to manage upgrades. > > > > Anyway, feedback (even typos :-P) most welcome. > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > EFS-dev mailing list > [email protected] > http://mailman.openefs.org/mailman/listinfo/efs-dev > >
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