branch: externals/url-http-oauth-demo
commit 68dd6973b240ba98bc11b9be60b58ddb7d4a9503
Author: Thomas Fitzsimmons <fitz...@fitzsim.org>
Commit: Thomas Fitzsimmons <fitz...@fitzsim.org>

    Update comments
    
    * url-http-oauth-demo.el: Update some comments.
---
 url-http-oauth-demo.el | 30 +++++++++++++++---------------
 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

diff --git a/url-http-oauth-demo.el b/url-http-oauth-demo.el
index 9b10120340..b6d9a2c9bd 100644
--- a/url-http-oauth-demo.el
+++ b/url-http-oauth-demo.el
@@ -101,29 +101,29 @@
 ;;; Code:
 (require 'url-http-oauth)
 
-;;; Tell Emacs that the URL "https://meta.sr.ht/query";, with
-;;; client-identifier "107ba4a9-2a96-4420-8818-84ec1f112405", uses
-;;; OAuth 2.0 for authentication and authorization.
+;;; Tell Emacs that the URL "https://meta.sr.ht/query"; uses OAuth 2.0
+;;; for authentication and authorization.
 ;;;###autoload
 (url-http-oauth-interpose
- '(;; This is the client identifier, which can be generated by the
-   ;; user, or by the Emacs library developer, at
-   ;; "https://meta.sr.ht/oauth2/client-registration";.
-   ("client-identifier" . "107ba4a9-2a96-4420-8818-84ec1f112405")
-   ;; This is the URL at which the `url-http-oauth-demo' package will
-   ;; access resources.  Everything that follows is for authentication
-   ;; and authorization to satisfy OAuth 2.0 requirements.
+ '(;; The client identifier.  Replace
+   ;; "00000000-0000-0000-0000-000000000000" with a new client
+   ;; identifier generated by the user, or by the Emacs library
+   ;; developer, at "https://meta.sr.ht/oauth2/client-registration";.
+   ("client-identifier" . "00000000-0000-0000-0000-000000000000")
+   ;; The URL at which the `url-http-oauth-demo' package will access
+   ;; resources.  Everything that follows is for authentication and
+   ;; authorization to satisfy OAuth 2.0 requirements.
    ("resource-url" . "https://meta.sr.ht/query";)
-   ;; These are the authorization and token endpoints, published in
+   ;; The authorization and token endpoints, published in
    ;; "https://man.sr.ht/meta.sr.ht/oauth.md";.  There is no way to
    ;; autodiscover them from "https://meta.sr.ht/query";.
    ("authorization-endpoint" . "https://meta.sr.ht/oauth2/authorize";)
    ("access-token-endpoint" . "https://meta.sr.ht/oauth2/access-token";)
-   ;; This is the list of features to which Emacs is requesting the
-   ;; server grant it access.
+   ;; The list of features to which Emacs is requesting the server
+   ;; grant it access.
    ("scope" . "meta.sr.ht/PROFILE:RO")
-   ;; This is the client secret, which will be generated as part of
-   ;; client registration, at
+   ;; The client secret, which will be generated as part of client
+   ;; registration, at
    ;; "https://meta.sr.ht/oauth2/client-registration";.  If the user
    ;; generates the client secret, they should note it down.  If the
    ;; Emacs library developer generates it, they should make it

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