Thank you for your comments, Greg.

On 20/05/2021 01:06, Greg Minshall wrote:
> 
> patches to patches... :)  i think these are really just typos, rather
> than any useful substantial comment.
> 
> - s/is enable (the default) or not:/is enabled (the default) or not:/

The patch removed this phrase.

> - i would suggest separate tables for >= 9.5 and < 9.5.  just so the
>   differences between with/without =electric-indent-mode= are easier to
>   spot.

I have no idea how to express it in a better way. The tables are same
for Org >= 9.5 and for Org < 9.5 (modulo bugs in indentation fixed in 9.4.6).
Only default configuration evolves in time.

1. Before 9.4. (org-adapt-indentation t) electric-indent-mode disabled.
   Bugs remained unnoticed. Users were unaware that default configuration
   assumed indented text aligned to headline title.
2. 9.4. (org-adapt-indentation t) electric-indent-mode enabled.
   Hot discussions and recommendations to disable electric-indent-mode
   since even with (org-adapt-indentation headline-data) behavior was strange.
3. Recent changes. Bugs fixed, (org-adapt-indentation nil), so as earlier
   text is not indented by default. Now absence of indentation is consistent
   with settings.

> - s/C-j anywhere/C-j elsewhere/ (and, iiuc, maybe also the "unadorned"
>   [C-j] table entry should probably be [C-j elsewhere]?)
> 
> - s/lost formatting/lose formatting/
> 
> - s/and, that is/and,/

Agree.

> - s/always indent relatively/always indent relative/

Not being a native speaker, I would either leave it as is or would change
all 3 phrases attempting to make their style more uniform.

a. "do not indent anything",
   "always indent relatively to the element above",
   "indent just ~PROPERTIES/LOGBOOK~ drawers relatively
   to the current heading level"

b. "no special indentation",
   "indentation of all elements is relative to the element above",
   "only ~PROPERTIES/LOGBOOK~ drawers get indentation relative
   to the current heading level"


If you think that your variant is better, I can add it to the patch.

> - s/the the element/to the element/

Agree.

Intermediate patch is attached.
>From 1881aacf22fda650408434394a96f3aaea2c6928 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Max Nikulin <maniku...@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 20 May 2021 22:48:58 +0700
Subject: [PATCH] org-faq.org: Fix typos and style in "setup for indenting"

* org-faq.org (What is the best setup for indenting?): Minor
corrections suggested by Greg Minshall.
---
 org-faq.org | 16 ++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/org-faq.org b/org-faq.org
index 0f8934af..54d5e403 100644
--- a/org-faq.org
+++ b/org-faq.org
@@ -1039,7 +1039,7 @@ In more details, ~org-adapt-indentation~ controls indentation with
 regards to previous element.  Apparent effect is increased indentation
 for content of deeper nested headings.  The variable accepts three
 values: =nil= (no special indentation), =t= (always indent relatively
-the the element above) and =headline-data= (only indent the
+to the element above) and =headline-data= (only indent the
 ~PROPERTIES/LOGBOOK~ drawers relatively to the current level).  Value
 =t= is suitable for short entries especially if you plan to share your
 documents with someone who does not use Emacs.  If you just want to
@@ -1059,8 +1059,8 @@ With ~electric-indent-mode~ enabled:
 |---------------------------+------------------------+----------------------------+----------------------------|
 | RET after a headline      | Do not indent          | Indent                     | Do not indent              |
 | C-j after a headline      | Do not indent          | Do not indent              | Do not indent              |
-| RET anywhere              | Indent wrt previous    | Indent wrt previous        | Indent wrt previous        |
-| C-j anywhere              | Do not indent wrt prev | Do not indent wrt previous | Do not indent wrt previous |
+| RET elsewhere             | Indent wrt previous    | Indent wrt previous        | Indent wrt previous        |
+| C-j elsewhere             | Do not indent wrt prev | Do not indent wrt previous | Do not indent wrt previous |
 | Insert PROPERTIES/LOGBOOK | Do not indent          | Indent wrt headline        | Indent wrt headline        |
 
 With ~electric-indent-mode~ disabled:
@@ -1069,21 +1069,21 @@ With ~electric-indent-mode~ disabled:
 |---------------------------+---------------------+----------------------------+----------------------------|
 | RET after a headline      | Do not indent       | Do not indent              | Do not indent              |
 | C-j after a headline      | Do not indent       | Indent                     | Do not indent              |
-| RET                       | Do not indent       | Do not indent wrt previous | Do not indent wrt previous |
-| C-j                       | Indent wrt previous | Indent wrt previous        | Indent wrt previous        |
+| RET elsewhere             | Do not indent       | Do not indent wrt previous | Do not indent wrt previous |
+| C-j elsewhere             | Indent wrt previous | Indent wrt previous        | Indent wrt previous        |
 | Insert PROPERTIES/LOGBOOK | Do not indent       | Indent wrt headline        | Indent wrt headline        |
 
 Do not try to avoid or to ignore indentation of heading body or
 properties drawer determined by current state of
 ~org-adapt-indentation~ and ~electric-indent-mode~ by pressing =C-j=
 instead of =RET= (or vice versa). The result is transient and you will
-lost formatting when you refile heading or change its level (promote
+lose formatting when you refile heading or change its level (promote
 or demote it).
 
 You may have noticed recommendation to disable ~electric-indent-mode~
 to restore behavior prior to Org 9.4.  In Org 9.5
-~org-adapt-indentation~ default value changed to =nil= and, that is
-more important, a number of bugs related to indentation were fixed.
+~org-adapt-indentation~ default value changed to =nil= and, more
+importantly, a number of bugs related to indentation were fixed.
 Using =RET= with enabled ~electric-indent-mode~ should be convenient
 now.  Just customize ~org-adapt-indentation~ variable accordingly to
 you preferences.
-- 
2.25.1

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