Here's my attempt.

It's my first time doing this, so kindly let me know if there's
something I can do better!

For example, should I have replaced the subject line of this email with
the subject in the formatted .patch?


On 2023-06-21 10:26, Ihor Radchenko wrote:
> libreville <librevi...@riseup.net> writes:
> 
>> Chapter A.1 Hooks of the Org Manual reads, in its entirety:
>> ...
>> Contrary to what it says, I couldn't find any illustrations of hook
>> usage in the appendix. The Variables index only refers to four, and
>> they're in other places.
>>
>> Perhaps the line about illustrating could be deleted, to avoid sending
>> people on a search for something that isn't there?
> 
> Agree.
> Would you be interested to submit a patch?
From c1fda8d0162583db709c90f01df2b8678ddc7957 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: libreville <librevi...@riseup.net>
Date: Wed, 21 Jun 2023 13:04:19 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Delete reference to non-existent examples of hook usage.

---
 doc/org-manual.org | 7 +++----
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/org-manual.org b/doc/org-manual.org
index 4feb15e71..21582fe8e 100644
--- a/doc/org-manual.org
+++ b/doc/org-manual.org
@@ -21128,10 +21128,9 @@ of Org.
 :END:
 #+cindex: hooks
 
-Org has a large number of hook variables for adding functionality.
-This appendix illustrates using a few.  A complete list of hooks with
-documentation is maintained by the Worg project at
-https://orgmode.org/worg/doc.html#hooks.
+Org has a large number of hook variables for adding functionality.  A
+complete list of hooks with documentation is maintained by the Worg
+project at https://orgmode.org/worg/doc.html#hooks.
 
 ** Add-on Packages
 :PROPERTIES:
-- 
2.30.2

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