Hello,
I have attached 4 patches with grammar and style corrections for
worg-about.org
Best regards,
Raoul Comninos
From cc65944bfa4ffb43e6ddb0b2a8fb85d61c40d42f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Raoul Comninos <gnarledg...@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 3 May 2025 07:56:23 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 1/4] worg-about.org: Remove redundant "Because" from sentence
beginnings
* worg-about.org (Why use Org-mode for creating a collaborative
website?): Delete three instances of "Because" at the start of
sentences to improve readability.
---
worg-about.org | 6 +++---
1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
diff --git a/worg-about.org b/worg-about.org
index 666ddd2a..ed05a54d 100644
--- a/worg-about.org
+++ b/worg-about.org
@@ -47,16 +47,16 @@ bite into this and start sharing tutorials, example of codes, etc.
* Why use Org-mode for creating a collaborative website?
-Because Org makes it easy, fast and effective to edit *well-structured*
+Org makes it easy, fast and effective to edit *well-structured*
files. Ever wanted to edit a [[file:org-tutorials/tables.org][table]] in a wiki? Ever wanted to change
the outline structure in a wikipage? Ever wanted to edit lists
quickly? Org lets you do this.
-Because Org-mode makes *beautiful* documents: it supports links, font
+Org-mode makes *beautiful* documents: it supports links, font
beautification, examples, etc. And you can export those documents to
HTML, LaTeX, or DocBook.
-Because Org is also a powerful *task-management system*. Hopefully sharing
+Org is also a powerful *task-management system*. Hopefully sharing
a [[file:todo.org][TODO file]] will make it easy for everyone to know where he could help.
* OK, I want to *contribute to Worg* now!
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2.43.0
From a69aba415d3489ba94d3c72a064b3d1839f3845d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Raoul Comninos <gnarledg...@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 3 May 2025 08:05:24 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 2/4] worg-about.org: Fix grammar errors in git instructions
* worg-about.org: Fix three grammatical errors:
- Remove extra "are" from "If you are have write access"
- Change "last version" to "latest version"
- Change "various git workflow" to "various git workflows" (plural)
---
worg-about.org | 6 +++---
1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
diff --git a/worg-about.org b/worg-about.org
index ed05a54d..3b68ad34 100644
--- a/worg-about.org
+++ b/worg-about.org
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ and push commits directly.
: ~$ git commit -a -m "summary comment about all changes"
-7. If you are have write access, push your change directly to Worg:
+7. If you have write access, push your change directly to Worg:
: ~$ git push
@@ -135,12 +135,12 @@ issues are trivial to fix.
1. Go to your =worg/= directory.
-2. Be sure to "pull" the last version of the repository.
+2. Be sure to "pull" the latest version of the repository.
: ~$ git pull --rebase
3. Make some changes. (If you want to learn more about various git
- workflow, read [[file:worg-git-advanced.org][this page]].)
+ workflows, read [[file:worg-git-advanced.org][this page]].)
4. Commit your changes on your local repository:
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2.43.0
From ff090484f2c4f0569407b74452a2b7a3e828a3a9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Raoul Comninos <gnarledg...@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 3 May 2025 08:15:03 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 4/4] worg-about.org: Add comma for clarity
* worg-about.org: Add comma after "repository" to properly set off
the contrasting phrase "in contrast to other back ends like svn."
---
worg-about.org | 2 +-
1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
diff --git a/worg-about.org b/worg-about.org
index 80cd8cd0..14e94e10 100644
--- a/worg-about.org
+++ b/worg-about.org
@@ -219,7 +219,7 @@ See [[file:worg-git-advanced.org][this page]].
Emacs's VC supports many common git operations, but others, like
repository syncing must be done from the command line. For example
the Command =C-x v v= does check in changes in the *local* and not in the
-*remote* repository in contrast to other back ends like svn. It is
+*remote* repository, in contrast to other back ends like svn. It is
necessary to do additionally
: ~$ git push
--
2.43.0
From e213a8a0de033dbc6a069d2cc693749dbc28a214 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Raoul Comninos <gnarledg...@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 3 May 2025 08:13:16 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 3/4] worg-about.org: Use correct prepositions with repository
commands
* worg-about.org: Fix prepositions in steps 4 and 5:
- "Commit...on your local repository" -> "Commit...to your local repository"
- "Push...on the remote repository" -> "Push...to the remote repository"
---
worg-about.org | 4 ++--
1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
diff --git a/worg-about.org b/worg-about.org
index 3b68ad34..80cd8cd0 100644
--- a/worg-about.org
+++ b/worg-about.org
@@ -142,11 +142,11 @@ issues are trivial to fix.
3. Make some changes. (If you want to learn more about various git
workflows, read [[file:worg-git-advanced.org][this page]].)
-4. Commit your changes on your local repository:
+4. Commit your changes to your local repository:
: ~$ git commit -a -m "summary comment about all changes"
-5. Push your change on the remote repository
+5. Push your change to the remote repository
: ~$ git push
--
2.43.0
