Alan, I've reviewed this document and it appears fine to me. Couple of small comments:
1) Can a reference be made to the definitions of "good", "strong" and "weak", regarding cryptographic strength; although section 6.1 does define "weak" quite well. 2) Within sections 4.2.1.1.2 amd 4.2.1.1.3, its not immediately clear what "one mandatory" is referring to. Is this a "mandatory algorithm" or a "mandatory feature"? It could perhaps do with a little clarification. Kind regards Stephen McCann On 20 May 2010 15:33, Alan DeKok <[email protected]> wrote: > The current version of the document has addressed all open concerns. > We will therefore be having a last call lasting for two weeks, until > June 4, 2010. > > Please take the time to review the document for any issues. Reviews > should be posted to the list, and should contain technical and editorial > comments. > > If there are no objections, we will start the publication process. If > all goes well, the document should be in process by the next IETF meeting. > > Alan DeKok. > > > [email protected] wrote: >> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts >> directories. >> This draft is a work item of the EAP Method Update Working Group of the IETF. >> >> >> Title : Requirements for a Tunnel Based EAP Method >> Author(s) : K. Hoeper, et al. >> Filename : draft-ietf-emu-eaptunnel-req-06.txt >> Pages : 24 >> Date : 2010-05-14 >> >> This memo defines the requirements for a tunnel-based Extensible >> Authentication Protocol (EAP) Method. This method will use Transport >> Layer Security (TLS) to establish a secure tunnel. The tunnel will >> provide support for password authentication, EAP authentication and >> the transport of additional data for other purposes. >> >> A URL for this Internet-Draft is: >> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-emu-eaptunnel-req-06.txt >> >> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: >> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ >> >> Below is the data which will enable a MIME compliant mail reader >> implementation to automatically retrieve the ASCII version of the >> Internet-Draft. >> >> >> ------------------------------------------------------------------------ >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Emu mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/emu > > _______________________________________________ > Emu mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/emu > _______________________________________________ Emu mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/emu
