Hi,
I have reviewed this draft multiple times, I think this draft is very
well-written and ready to be published. A few minor comments:
- "3rd Generation Authentication and Key Agreement"
I see that this exact term was used in RFC 5448, but I find it quite strange. I
think the terminology is wrong as UMTS AKA was the second generation AKA made
for the third generation cellular networks.... I find "3G Authentication and
Key Agreement (AKA)", or the terminology used in RFC 4186 ("The Authentication
and Key Agreement (AKA) mechanism used in 3rd generation mobile networks") to
be much better. 3GPP calls the different AKA mechanisms: GSM AKA, UMTS AKA, EPS
AKA, 5G AKA.
- "EAP-AKA' is commonly implemented in smart phones and network equipment."
"smart phones" is often uses for a certain class of phones, I assume EAP-AKA'
is also commonly implemented in feature phones. Suggestion:
OLD: "smart phones"
NEW: "mobile phones"
(it is also commonly implemented in IoT devices that are not phones at all...)
- I previously sent this in a different thread:
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/emu/fHopSdLqMY37odPGvwn7M5ZksIw
Reading draft-dekok-emu-eap-session-id-00, I noticed that
draft-ietf-emu-rfc5448bis uses
a different notation (decimal vs. hexadecimal) than other related drafts.
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-emu-rfc5448bis
Session-Id = 50 || RAND || AUTN
Session-Id = 50 || NONCE_S || MAC
https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5247
Session-Id = 0x17 || RAND || AUTN
Session-Id = 0x12 || RAND || NONCE_MT
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-dekok-emu-eap-session-id
Session-Id = 0x17 || RAND || AUTN
Session-Id = 0x17 || NONCE_S || MAC
Session-Id = 0x12 || RAND || NONCE_MT
As all other EAP RFCs I can find (RFC 5247, RFC 5216) also use hexadecimal
notation, I suggest that draft-ietf-emu-rfc5448bis is updated to avoid any
confusion for implementors:
OLD: "Session-Id = 50 || RAND || AUTN"
NEW: "Session-Id = 0x32 || RAND || AUTN"
OLD: "Session-Id = 50 || NONCE_S || MAC"
NEW: "Session-Id = 0x32 || NONCE_S || MAC"
- "[TS-3GPP.35.208] .... (Release 14)"
A release 15 version of TS 35.208 has now been published. Most of the other
3GPP references are out-of-date. Maybe add an editor's note that all 3GPP
references should be updated to the latest Release 15 version before publishing.
- "Appendix G. Acknowledgments"
Should not be numbered according to RFC 7322
OLD: <section title="Acknowledgments">
NEW: <section title="Acknowledgments" numbered="false">
Cheers,
John
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