On May 15, 2021, at 8:21 PM, Joseph Salowey <[email protected]> wrote:
> I proposed a PR#72 based on this suggestion. The resulting text for the 
> section is below.  Please review to see if it is OK.

  It looks good, subject to minor comments.

>    The EAP peer identity provided in the EAP-Response/Identity is not
>    authenticated by EAP-TLS.  Unauthenticated information SHALL NOT be

  This is just a personal preference, but "MUST NOT" is clearer to me than 
SHALL NOT.  It's also more used, IIRC.

>    The EAP server identity in the TLS server certificate is typically a
>    fully qualified domain name (FQDN).  EAP peer implementations SHOULD
>    allow users to configure a unique trust root (CA certificate) and a
>    server name to authenticate the server certificate and match the

  The later text discusses multiple names, so perhaps instead

        ... and one or more server names ...

  Alan DeKok.

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