On Jul 16, 2021, at 6:26 AM, Carolin Baumgartner <la...@angry-red-pla.net> wrote: >> Provided there's some network connection available, everything else can be >> automatic. > ah yes. I guess it might make sense to make that clear towards the beginning > of the document :-) I only got a later ....
I'll definitely fix that. > I finished the document now and really like it. I just think the normative > part comes quite late in the document. Maybe it should also be referenced in > earlier sections. To make it stronger, you could even use SHOULD instead of > RECOMMENDED (in section 8.2), I guess SHOULD and RECOMMENDED are synonyms for this purpose. I left the normative bits to the end because I wanted to explain the problem, and then give examples of the solution first. Once those are clear, they then motivate the normative text. I found that if I put the normative text earlier, then people would ask "why these decisions?", only to have them answered later in the document. Alan DeKok. _______________________________________________ Emu mailing list Emu@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/emu
