Hi to all,
I have found some small typos.
Section 2.4:
> There no "context_value" ([RFC8446] Section 7.5) passed to the TLS-
> Exporter function.
I suppose an "is" is missing.
Section 3:
At the end of the 6th paragraph
> completely bypass the "inner tunnel" authentication
a dot is missing at the end of the sentence.
Section 3.1:
> with new identies pointing to the new "cloude"
change to "cloud"
Greetings
Janfred
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