On Tue, 3 Jun 2025, 14:10 Joseph Salowey, <[email protected]> wrote:

> Thanks for the review:
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> On Thu, May 29, 2025 at 7:17 AM Erik Kline via Datatracker <
> [email protected]> wrote:
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>> Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
>> charter-ietf-emu-07-00: Yes
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>> # Internet AD comments for charter-ietf-emu-07-00
>> CC @ekline
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>> ## Comments
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>> * I'm unclear on the technical specifics, but in the "privacy pass"
>> paragraph
>>   it could be noted that the working group will reuse various things
>> already
>>   developed and not go off and (re)invent crypto/privacy things?
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>
> I think we may have lost this detail in the editing, How about:
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> "While some EAP methods can provide some privacy there still can be a
> leakage of information as to which networks a particular user is accessing.
> Privacy pass protocols and tokens provide mechanisms to protect the user's
> privacy in this situation. The group will work on an EAP method based on
> Privacy Pass that provides privacy by preventing a visited network or
> service from knowing the identity of a user, and for keeping the user's
> identity provider from tracking what networks or services the user is
> accessing."
>


LGTM

Thanks!

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>> ## Nits
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>> * "is now more broadly in mobile network authentication" ->
>>   "is now used more broadly in mobile network authentication"?
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> Yes that should be fixed
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