Thanks for taking care of this Gorry > On 28 Aug 2025, at 13:30, Owen Friel (ofriel) <[email protected]> wrote: > > Thanks Gorry. See inline. > > -----Original Message----- > From: Gorry Fairhurst via Datatracker <[email protected]> > Sent: Thursday 28 August 2025 07:56 > To: The IESG <[email protected]> > Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; > [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected] > Subject: Gorry Fairhurst's No Objection on > draft-ietf-emu-bootstrapped-tls-08: (with COMMENT) > > Gorry Fairhurst has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-emu-bootstrapped-tls-08: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email > addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to > https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ > for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-emu-bootstrapped-tls/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Thank you for prepaing this document. I did not see any transport-related > issues, but have a couple of general comments that might be useful to > address in the next revision: > > 1. I would encourage expansion of DPP in the abstract to ensure that anyone > scanning the abstract finds and understands the term, e.g.: > Device Provisioning Protocol (DPP) > > [ofriel] Addressed by: https://github.com/upros/tls-pok/pull/26 > > 2. The following text appears before the declaration of RFC 2119 keywords: > "Thus, the intention is that DPP is the > RECOMMENDED mechanism for bootstrapping against Wi-Fi networks, and > TLS-POK is the RECOMMENDED mechanism for bootstrapping against wired > networks." > - It could be that the RECOMMENDED could be lower case, since this does > not describe interoperability. It could also be possible to move this > text slightly later in the document. > > [ofriel] Similar feedback already received and addressed by: > https://github.com/upros/tls-pok/pull/22/files > > >
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