Comments inline. In general don't forget to capitalize GNOME. s/Gnome/GNOME/g
On 06/19/2014 02:05 PM, Sriram Ramkrishna wrote: > Can you guys look at this? Sadly, I need to get this done by today, > according to our team at 01.org. :( > > The Value of the GNOME Project. > > GNOME is a freely available operating system for desktops, laptops and > netbooks, highly influential in the Linux community due to the project > community’s unique commitment to the user experience. > > > > Used by millions of people around the world, it is the most popular > environment for GNU/Linux and UNIX-type operating systems. GNOME’s "As the most popular environment for ... operating systems, GNOME is used by millions of people around the world. Additionally, GNOME's..." is a bit less awkward. Isn't OS X's DE more popular than all of *nix combined? (I don't know if Unix-type is the best term here, or if its necessary). Maybe 'Free & Open Source' operating systems? desktop environment perhaps? > software has been utilized in successful, large-scale enterprise and > public deployments. > > > > Gnome’s close alignment with human-computer interaction drives > technical requirements in areas such as interface design, toolkits, > graphics and display rendering. These innovations have been picked-up It might be good to also some socio-technical values like i18n, l10n, a11y, and GNOME Love, GSoC, & OPW? > by other Linux operating system projects such as Ubuntu and Red Hat > Enterprise Linux (Fedora), Chrome, MeeGo, and Tizen distributions > (including Tizen IVI). > > > > Who It’s For > > Gnome is used directly by consumers, and its open source code is > utilized by operating system vendors, system integrators, original > device and equipment manufactures and others who are building custom > Linux desktop and distributions. Application developers also use GNOME > for development and test activities. > > > > Project Specifics > > Gnome is written primarily in the C language, distributed under the > LGPL v2.1 license, with over five thousand contributors including > writers, designers, translators and programmers. written in C with bindings for a multitude of languages (with GObject Introspection) > > > > About Intel Involvement > > Intel has contributed engineering talent as well as user experience > research to GNOME in recognition of its its... Intel also recently donated hardware for HiDPI support, no? > > > > It is compatible through open source with Intel® Atom™ processors and > Intel® Core™ processors. > _______________________________________________ > engagement-list mailing list > [email protected] > https://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/engagement-list > _______________________________________________ engagement-list mailing list [email protected] https://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/engagement-list
