Hey Bastian, Great job, as always! I've added some suggestions and questions at the bottom of the wiki page ( https://wiki.gnome.org/ThreePointTwentyone/ReleaseVideo).
Thanks for all your effort on this - I can't wait to see it! :) Best, Nuritzi On Tue, Sep 6, 2016 at 5:06 AM, Bastian Ilso <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi everyone, > > > I need your input on the 3.22 Release Video manuscript. You can read it > here: > https://wiki.gnome.org/ThreePointTwentyone/ReleaseVideo > > > We reach out to ~100,000 viewers, let's strongly consider what we show: > - Is there something about the release you think we should cover better? > - Is there something taking too much narrator time? > - Do you have suggestions for music (for CC-BY-SA 4.0)? > > > My thoughts on what the video should cover: > - Emphasize our values: being the modern, bleeding-edge, > community-powered, free and open desktop. > - Talk about the technological advancements we are making (fx > sandboxing/distribution), but keep it on a high level. > - Show highlights of the new application features, thank our contributors. > - Make a call for new contributors towards the end, they can help us make > a difference. > > > Feel free to: > 1) Edit the manuscript as you wish. > 2) Reply with feedback in this thread. > 3) Reply with feedback on the wiki page. > > > Your input is very valuable, I expect to finish the manuscript by Sunday > the 11th. Thank you so much! > > -Bastian > > _______________________________________________ > engagement-list mailing list > [email protected] > https://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/engagement-list > > -- ............................................................ ................. *Nuritzi Sanchez* | +1.650.218.7388 | Endless <http://endlessm.com/>
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