*"A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets lots of exercise and avoids stress. What should people do to stay healthy? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience." * Today people are more concerned with their quality of life in order to be healthier. They know, in order to be healthy, that they must change their eating habits, get into shape and prevent stressful situations. So they adopt different approaches to raise their health level which in my opinion are categorized in two groups of measures, one which considers body and the other which pays attention to mind.
In case of body, people do more physical exercises these days. they go to swimming pools or work out in a health club. In addition, some people use bicycle to commute which affects not only their own health, but also by contribution to decreasing air pollution, It makes other people breathe in fresher air and be healthier. Moreover, people are paying more attention to their diets. That is they have reduced the amount of fat and red meat in their meals and consume fish, vegetables and fruit more than previous. Likewise, many people who used to smoke cigarette do no longer smoke, which have led to fewer number of cancers people used to suffer. People not only pay attention to their physical aspect of their health, but also they try to get rid of many mental problems by avoiding causes of mental diseases. In this regard, yoga and meditation classes are very popular these days among young and old people. Moreover, they avoid different kinds of stresses by learning preventive methods and in severe cases, they are more likely to visit a consultant or psychologist. I myself really care about my health. I use to work out in a nearby health club 3 days a week and exercise aerobics in order to be fit and happy. In addition, we go hiking fairly regularly at the weekends and also I have changed my eating habit by omitting liquid oil and replacing it with natural olive oil as well as cooking by steam. To sum up, I believe that all these considerations will certainly improve human's health both physically and mentally. On Tue, Jul 28, 2009 at 4:30 PM, Elham Moazzen <[email protected]>wrote: > Dear Tojan > > I am looking forward to your kind comments on my essay #1. > Thanks in advance for your favor. > > I selected a topic from your site whose link is > http://www.yourieltsonline.com/WMT-1.html > > "A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets > lots of exercise and avoids stress. What should people do to stay healthy? > Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your > own knowledge or experience." > > I will send my essay # 2. > > Regards > > Elham > > > On Tue, Jul 28, 2009 at 3:51 PM, Elham Moazzen <[email protected]>wrote: > >> * >> ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- >> * >> >> Linguistic scientists are conducting research about the effective ways of >> learning English. These ways usually concentrate on a specific skill in >> order to train students to use English as a second language effectively. >> These skills are generally categorized in 4 groups of reading, listening, >> speaking and writing. Some experts believe that learning with the most focus >> on some of these skills will help to proceed faster than using another ones. >> In my opinion, learning through reading as much comprehensible and >> interesting texts as possible will fasten the process of learning English. >> >> Reading an article in English makes us familiar with language constructs >> and also provides us with new words as well as they way of using them >> correctly. Moreover, by reading again and again, our mind will automatically >> be trained to make sentences in English properly due to the fact that It has >> seen many correct samples before. The next effective way is through >> listening understandable materials since it reviews all the structures, >> grammar and new vocabulary we have already learned. Indeed, both reading and >> listening to as much understandable English articles as possible will >> improve our English fluency faster because they provide us with perfect >> sources from native speakers. >> >> Then, the learner can try to write some essays or speak English in order >> to practice what he has learned and find his mistakes. However, without a >> rich background, which is acquired by reading and listening to English >> sources, just practicing English by writing or speaking may not come handy >> to learn a foreign language perfectly. >> >> In conclusion, although with each skill we can improve our English >> language competency, in my opinion, Learning via reading is the most >> effective way to achieve this goal. I think the more essays one reads, the >> fastest his English fluency will improve. >> >> * >> ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- >> * >> >> >> On Mon, Jul 27, 2009 at 12:12 PM, tojan antony <[email protected]>wrote: >> >>> i think your score for writing module is less. >>> don't get worried. IELTS is the easiest exam available. >>> >>> As of now, focus on writing.i am giving you a topic.On one condition,If >>> it's good then it will be published in in my website.Take it seriously. >>> >>> You have to write for 300 words.Your topic should contain the following. >>> >>> 1). Good vocabulary(Not superfluous). >>> >>> 2). In first paragraph you have to write the overview of the topic given >>> 3). In second paragraph you have to write the arguments and reasons >>> supporting your arguments. >>> 4).In last paragraph you have to conclude with a small summary supporting >>> your all arguments. >>> >>> >>> Topic " With which skill you can learn english language >>> faster.Listening,Reading,Writing or Speaking?. >>> >>> >>> >>> tojan >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> On Mon, Jul 27, 2009 at 10:58 AM, Elham Moazzen >>> <[email protected]>wrote: >>> >>>> Dear Tojan >>>> >>>> I have studied English for many years in different institutes, After >>>> entering university, I didn't continue participating in classes instead I >>>> used media like internet to study English. >>>> >>>> I think at the moment, I have the overall of 6.5 but I want to improve >>>> it at least to 7. I am taking part in skill classes, and finished Reading >>>> and studying writing now. But those classes because of the number of >>>> students do not help me a lot. >>>> >>>> I especially need a good teacher to correct my writings. >>>> >>>> Regards >>>> Elham >>>> >>>> >>>> On Sun, Jul 26, 2009 at 9:52 PM, tojan antony <[email protected]>wrote: >>>> >>>>> Hai, >>>>> >>>>> For getting an overview, you can collect information from >>>>> http://www.yourieltsonline.com >>>>> >>>>> To get a fair idea about your english skills, you have to give the >>>>> following details. >>>>> details of your schooling? >>>>> experience with english language? >>>>> Your interests like reading books, writing articles, writing jokes etc? >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> with regards >>>>> tojan >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> On Sun, Jul 26, 2009 at 6:40 PM, Elham Moazzen <[email protected] >>>>> > wrote: >>>>> >>>>>> Dear Tojan >>>>>> Seeing your email really surprised me, because I am taking my IELTS >>>>>> exam in the end of September and I need a lot of help to improve my >>>>>> writing. >>>>>> *I really need your hellp.* >>>>>> Will you please do me a favor and aid me to get 7 ? >>>>>> I need 7 to apply for Canadian universities for Ph.D. of Software >>>>>> Engineering. >>>>>> I am interestingly looking forward to hearing from you. >>>>>> Elham >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> On Mon, Jul 20, 2009 at 8:38 AM, to...@yourieltsonline < >>>>>> [email protected]> wrote: >>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Hai, >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I am tojan. I am an IELTS Trainer and owner of website on IELTS named >>>>>>> http://www.yourieltsonline.com >>>>>>> >>>>>>> i have vast experience in IELTS exams and spend atleast a couple of >>>>>>> hours in studying and preparing study materials for exam aspirants. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I would like to share my experience and knowledge with you all . >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Best wishes >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Tojan >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> -- >>>>>>> >>>>>>> "When you know what you want,and you want it badly enough,you'll find >>>>>>> a way to get it." >>>>>>> >>>>>>> "Successful leaders have the courage to take action while others >>>>>>> hesitate." >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> -- >>>> >>>> "When you know what you want,and you want it badly enough,you'll find a >>>> way to get it." >>>> >>>> "Successful leaders have the courage to take action while others >>>> hesitate." >>>> >>>> >>>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >> >> >> -- >> >> "When you know what you want,and you want it badly enough,you'll find a >> way to get it." >> >> "Successful leaders have the courage to take action while others >> hesitate." >> > > > > -- > > "When you know what you want,and you want it badly enough,you'll find a way > to get it." > > "Successful leaders have the courage to take action while others hesitate." > -- "When you know what you want,and you want it badly enough,you'll find a way to get it." 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