Nicely done! I especially appreciate the navigation bar to the left, the
level of the month featrue and the updated screenshots.
I have a few suggestions for improvements though:
- I don't like the new logo, why didn't you use the old one?
- I would remove the "Enigma broke my computer! (Pay me!)" section. Not
only is it not a "frequently" asked question, it also doesn't look very
professional.
- There are quite a few spelling errors in the new material, for example:
Main page:
"largely enhanced" -> greatly enhanced
deepened all paged -> extended all pages
solvage -> ???
depent
Support page:
Furtheron
f.e. = e.g.
possiblity
faq = FAQ
reproducable
Development page:
maillist = mailing list
impressum = imprint
mailinglist
installion
nuissances
familar
automization
Enimga
attribut
pageversion
(I didn't run the other pages through a spell-checker.)
- Some texts don't sound very idiomatic: For example "Wondering why this
pages looks modified" might be improved to "Are you wondering why these
pages look different?". But then again, I'm not a native speaker either
;-)
Apart from that, I think the new pages are really an improvement on the
old ones!
Cheers
Daniel
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