Enlightenment CVS committal

Author  : dj2
Project : e17
Module  : docs

Dir     : e17/docs/cookbook/xml


Modified Files:
        intro.xml 


Log Message:
spelling and grammer fixes from Thomas Fletcher. Thanks.

===================================================================
RCS file: /cvsroot/enlightenment/e17/docs/cookbook/xml/intro.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -3 -r1.4 -r1.5
--- intro.xml   27 Jul 2004 08:34:42 -0000      1.4
+++ intro.xml   2 Sep 2004 19:07:05 -0000       1.5
@@ -2,11 +2,11 @@
  <title>Introduction</title>
 
  <para>
-Welcome to the enlightened state of programming.  This cookbook is a collection of 
tips, tricks, tutorials and introductions arranged into recipe style in order to help 
you becomes quickly proficience and effective with the Enlightenment Foundation 
Libraries.  The Enlightement Foundations Libraries, refered to simples as the EFL, is 
a collection of libraries origionally written support the Enlightenment DR17 Window 
Manager.  However, as these libraries grew and were tested and deployed more and more 
general functionality was added bringing us to enjoy a rich and powerful set of 
libraries that can solve all sorts of problems and also act as a venerable alternative 
to the currently popular GTK and QT.
+Welcome to the enlightened state of programming.  This cookbook is a collection of 
tips, tricks, tutorials and introductions arranged into recipe style in order to help 
you quickly become proficient with the Enlightenment Foundation Libraries.  The 
Enlightement Foundations Libraries, refered to simply as the EFL, is a collection of 
libraries origionally written for use by the Enlightenment DR17 Window Manager.  
However, as these libraries grew and were tested and deployed more and more, general 
functionality was added bringing us to enjoy a rich and powerful set of libraries that 
can be used to help solve all sorts of problems and act as a venerable alternative to 
the currently popular GTK and QT library sets.
  </para>
 
  <para>
-The EFL is a comprehensive group of C libraries that can provide for nearly any type 
of graphical need on nearly any platform.  The following is a consice breakdown of EFL 
componant libraries.
+        The EFL is a comprehensive group of C libraries that can provide a means for 
almost any graphical need on many platforms.  The following is a concise breakdown of 
libraries which make up the EFL.
 </para>
 
 <variablelist>
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
 
         <listitem>
         <para>
-       Canvas library with multiple backend engines including hardware OpenGL 
acceloration.  
+       Canvas library with multiple backend engines including hardware OpenGL 
acceleration.  
         </para>
         </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
 
         <listitem>
         <para>
-       Modular library collection with event handling and timers, plus sockets, IPC, 
FB and X11 setup, teardown, and event handling, job control, configuration handling 
and more.
+       Modular library with event handling and timers.  It also includes sockets, 
IPC, both FB and X11 setup, teardown, event handling, job control, configuration 
handling and more.
         </para>
         </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
 
         <listitem>
         <para>
-       A database library capabile of storing strings, values, and data for simple 
and centralized configuration handling.
+       A database library capabile of storing strings, values, and data for simple, 
consistant and centralized configuration handling.
         </para>
         </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@
 
         <listitem>
         <para>
-       An image abstraction library and toolset based on EVAS, keeping all aspects of 
the user interface completely seperate from application code through the use of signal 
passing.
+       An image abstraction library and toolkit based on EVAS, keeping all aspects of 
the user interface completely seperate from application code through the use of signal 
passing.
         </para>
         </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@
 
         <listitem>
         <para>
-       A text formating and manipulation library, complete with text stylization 
capabilities.
+       A text formatting and manipulation library, complete with text stylization 
capabilities.
         </para>
         </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@
 
         <listitem>
         <para>
-       A lightning fast thunbnailing library for JPEGs independant of other EFL 
componants.
+       A lightning fast thunbnailing library for JPEGs independant of other EFL 
components.
         </para>
         </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@
 
         <listitem>
         <para>
-       A flexable and fast thumbnailing library for PNG, XCF, GIF and JPEG.
+       A flexible and fast thumbnailing library for PNG, XCF, GIF and JPEG.
         </para>
         </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@
 
         <listitem>
         <para>
-       An EVAS canvas server library and toolset.
+       An EVAS canvas server library and toolkit.
         </para>
         </listitem>
 </varlistentry>




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