Enlightenment CVS committal

Author  : dj2
Project : e17
Module  : docs

Dir     : e17/docs/ewlbook/xml


Modified Files:
        bookinfo.xml intro.xml 


Log Message:
- some text changes

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RCS file: /cvsroot/enlightenment/e17/docs/ewlbook/xml/bookinfo.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -3 -r1.5 -r1.6
--- bookinfo.xml        25 Aug 2004 06:03:59 -0000      1.5
+++ bookinfo.xml        20 Jan 2005 18:12:28 -0000      1.6
@@ -1,10 +1,11 @@
 <bookinfo>
- <title>The EWL book</title>
+ <title>The Enlightened Widget Library (EWL) book</title>
  <authorgroup>
   <author>
    <firstname>dan</firstname>
    <surname>sinclair</surname>
    <othername>'dj2'</othername>
+   <email>[EMAIL PROTECTED]</email>
   </author>
  </authorgroup>
 
@@ -44,9 +45,9 @@
  <abstract>
   <para>
   A developers guide to the Enlightened Widget Library (EWL). This book
-  attempts to show how to use the EWL ranging from simply creating a new
-  window to writing a full video player. Along with introducing the EWL the
-  book aims to serve as a complete reference to the library including with
+  attempts to show how to use the EWL, from simply creating a window to 
+  writing a full video player. Along with introducing the EWL the
+  book aims to serve as a complete reference to the library including 
   code examples for each of the different widgets.
   </para>
  </abstract>
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RCS file: /cvsroot/enlightenment/e17/docs/ewlbook/xml/intro.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -3 -r1.3 -r1.4
--- intro.xml   23 Jul 2004 13:59:16 -0000      1.3
+++ intro.xml   20 Jan 2005 18:12:28 -0000      1.4
@@ -2,36 +2,40 @@
 <title>Introduction</title>
 
 <para>
-The EWL (Enlightened Widget Library) is a library for creating
-graphical user interfaces based upon the EFL (Enlightenment Foundation 
Libraries).
+The EWL is a library for creating graphical user interfaces based upon the 
+Enlightenment Foundation Libraries (EFL). The library aims to ease the pain
+of creating graphical interfaces. With that in mind the library aims for
+simplicity and elegance.
 </para>
 
 <para>
- The primary author of EWL is:
+ The EWL is authored primarily by:
 </para>
 <itemizedlist spacing="compact">
  <listitem><simpara>Nathan 'RbdPngn' Ingersoll</simpara></listitem>
 </itemizedlist>
 
 <para>
-EWL works in a similar fashion to other widget libraries, as it is 
+The EWL works in a similar fashion to other widget libraries, in that it is 
 based on a callback system. As elements are created and added to the 
-interface, any desired event callbacks are registered, these functions
-will be triggered when the specified event happens.
+interface any desired event callbacks are registered and these functions
+will be triggered when the specified events happen. This simple callback
+method makes it possible to build very complex interfaces from a relitively
+simple set of base primitives.
 </para>
 
 <para>
 This tutorial is an attempt to familiarize the user with the different
-aspects of the EWL system. The tutorial will probably never completely
+aspects of the EWL. The tutorial will probably never completely
 document all aspects of EWL as the system continues to grow. A good
 understanding of C programming is assumed throughout the tutorial.
 </para>
 
 <para>
-If you have any troubles with either this tutoral, or using EWL
-in general, any feedback is greatly appreciated as it would help improve either
-the tutorial or EWL itself. Please see <link 
linkend="ch-Contributing">Contributing</link>
-section for more information.
+If you have any troubles with either this tutoral, or using the EWL
+in general any feedback is greatly appreciated as it would help improve either
+the tutorial or the EWL itself. Please see the 
+<link linkend="ch-Contributing">Contributing</link> section for more 
information.
 </para>
 
 </chapter>




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