Enlightenment CVS committal

Author  : titan
Project : web
Module  : www

Dir     : web/www/p/about/dev


Modified Files:
        en-body 


Log Message:
Better grammar.

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RCS file: /cvs/e/web/www/p/about/dev/en-body,v
retrieving revision 1.9
retrieving revision 1.10
diff -u -3 -r1.9 -r1.10
--- en-body     23 Apr 2007 20:16:44 -0000      1.9
+++ en-body     23 Apr 2007 20:34:58 -0000      1.10
@@ -3,28 +3,26 @@
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 <p><b><center>Enlightenment DR17</center></b></p>
-<center><?php img("logo.png", "E"); ?></center>
-<p>Enlightenment 0.17 is the next generation of UNIX graphical environments. 
It is not just a window manager, but it is also a desktop shell.
-A desktop shell means, a window manager plus a file manager, plus 
configuration utilitys all in one. They are not separated as usual. Now, let's 
take a closer look at all E17 features...</p>
-<center><?php img("performance.png", "E"); ?></center>
+<p>Enlightenment 0.17 is the next generation of UNIX graphical environments. 
It is not only a window manager, but also a desktop shell.
+A desktop shell includes the following features: window manager, file manager, 
and configuration utilities. These features are not separated like other common 
environments. Now, let's take a closer look at what E17 has to offer...</p>
+<left><?php img("d/performance.png", "E"); ?></left>
 <p><b><center>Extremely High Performance.</center></b></p>
-<p>Enlightenment is fast. No, really. It's fast. It is known to run on very 
slow machines (like 186 Mhz CPU, 128 MB of RAM) well. So you really don't need 
a modern desktop to see some eye-candy and to use a modern graphical 
environment. Even more – you can control how fast you want it by using it's 
Performance configuration panel to change the cahce settings and more.</p>
+<p>Enlightenment is fast. It is known to run well on very slow machines, such 
as 186 Mhz processors with 128 MB of RAM. This means that you don't have to own 
the best hardware to get a good desktop experience. Even better, you can 
control how fast you want it to be by using it's performance configuration 
panel to change settings such as cache.</p>
 <center><?php img("eye_candy.png", "E"); ?></center>
 <p><b><center>Eye Candy On A Higher Level</center></b></p>
-<p>The high performance does not mean that there is no eye candy. There is eye 
candy that you have never seen before. Starting from the animated boot screen, 
to continue with the all animations and effects that themes could provide, to 
end up with fancy animated backgrounds. But not some huge .GIF files, but 
really nice animations. Every virtual desktop (at the moment you can have 24) 
can have it's own background (animated or not), so you can put different 
wallpapers on the different virtual desktops. There are a number of effects 
that can be shown when you switch from the different virtual desktops. The 
menus, the borders and all other usual parts of a normal window manager are 
animated as well as some of the widgets (the sliders, for example). Remember 
that those effects are provided by the theme, so every theme makes E to look 
different, with different effects, look and feel and animations.</p>
-<center><?php img("desktop_shell.png", "E"); ?></center>
-<p><b><center>A Desktop Shell</center></b></p>
-<p>As we already mentioned, E17 provides a file manager as well. Of the time 
of writing, it is not completed and is in active development (as E17 as a whole 
itself), but after it is finished it will be a very nice, configurable and eye 
candy. Even right now, you can do the basic things with it – browse, copy, 
move, delete files. It will provide thumbnails for your pictures and will be 
able to open your files with the coresponding application of your choice.</p>
+<p>High performance doesn't mean eye candy was sacrificed. Beautiful graphics 
and smooth effects make up the visual aspect of enlightenment. From animated 
boot screens and backgrounds, to the animations and effects that themes 
provide, the possibilities are amazing. Virtual desktops can have their own 
background (animated or not). Visual effects can be seen from desktop 
switching, to window minimizing and maximizing. The menus, borders, widgets, 
and all other parts of a normal window manager can be animated as well. Effects 
are provided by the theme, so every theme gives E a different look and feel.</p>
+<p><b><center>File Manager</center></b></p>
+<p>As we mentioned, E17 provides a file manager as well.  Right now, you can 
do the basics with it: browse , copy, move, and delete files and directories. 
It provides thumbnails and will open specified applications based on 
mimetype.</p>
 <p><b><center>Configurable</center></b></p>
-<p>E17 is highly configurable. Currently it has a nice configuration panel 
with 36 configuration dialogs for all kinds of things. You can change your 
wallpaper or your theme, your fonts, your screen resolution, your screen's 
power settings, your keyboard and mouse settings, the language that 
Enlightenment talks to you, and so on. You can contol almost every apsect of 
what E is doing and how. It will do what you want it to do.</p>
+<p>E17 is highly configurable. Currently it has a nice configuration panel 
with 36 configuration dialogs for all of you environment configuration needs. 
You can change your wallpaper, theme, fonts, screen resolution, screen's power 
settings, your keyboard and mouse settings and bindings, default language, and 
much more. You can contol almost every apsect of what E is doing and how.</p>
 <p><b><center>Localized</center></b></p>
-<p>At this moment, E17 is localized in 20 languages, including latin languages 
like English and French, cyrillic languages like Russian and Bulgarian and even 
Korean, Chinese, and Japanese. Note that you can change the language on the fly 
without restarting E or your X server.</p>
+<p>Currently, E17 is localized in 20 languages. This includes latin languages 
like English and French, cyrillic languages like Russian and Bulgarian and even 
Korean, Chinese, and Japanese. Note that you can change the language on the fly 
without restarting E or your X server.</p>
 <p><b><center>Full-featured</center></b></p>
-<p>As you already know, Enlightenment 0.17 has lots of features, but one of 
the most important is, that you can add and remove functionality by using 
modules. Modules are small applications that extend E17. There can be modules 
tho show you the weather outside, or calendar modules, or modules to control 
your volume or whatever you may think. Developing a module is not that hard, 
so, if you have programming skills, you are more than welcome to develop and 
maintain some modules for the community.</p>
+<p>As you already know, Enlightenment 0.17 has many features, but one of the 
most important is the functionality that you can add and remove with modules. 
Modules are small applications that extend E17. There are many modules 
including an application launcher, minimized applications container, pager, 
battery, temperature, frequency, and clock. Developing a module is simple even 
for the beggining programmer, and maintained modules are welcomed in the 
community.</p>
 
 <p><b><center>Standardized</center></b></b>
 
-<p>E17 is following all needed standards and specifications. NetWM, ICCCM, XDG 
and so on.</p> 
+<p>E17 is following most standards and specifications. NetWM, ICCCM, XDG, 
Freedesktop, and so on.</p> 
 
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