Entrance is a beautiful display manager builded with Enlightenment
Foundation Libraries.

builded with => built with

or "based on the"

Also IMHO remove the Elsa reference in the "es" version of the
article, it doesn't need to exist and it will just confuse people.

other than that they are pretty nice articles and look OK, well done! :)

On Tue, Nov 13, 2012 at 8:42 AM, Esteban Monge
<este...@nuevaeralatam.com> wrote:
> Hello I wrote two wiki pages in Debian Wiki for install and configure
> Entrance in this distribution:
>
> http://wiki.debian.org/entrance
>
> Hola escribí dos páginas wiki en la Wiki de Debian para instalar y
> configurar Entrance en esta distribución:
>
> http://wiki.debian.org/es/entrance
>
> I am very bad english writer... if need a suggest a fix... are welcome it.
>
> Si tienen alguna sugerencia, son bienvenidas.
>
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