I can say it's common for all of us to refer from net for getting more thorough idea of our subject but to google a subject isn't dat easy I know it very well dat sometimes it becomes really tiresome .But,it is important too.
My best wishes r wid u, Simone. On Tue, Aug 18, 2009 at 4:02 PM, pln471 <[email protected]> wrote: > > Hello hard-working and single-minded Elham Tojan Anu and other > helpers,:) > > I'm afraid I am good at correcting your essays as I told you earlier.: > ( > I read it twice and I found it flawless... > Thank God that Tojan is good at it! > > Keep in mind again as how to succeed in the writing test: > I found my Pass Cambridge Bec Higher Teacher's book(by Summertown > Publishing) > You'll find the Assessment Sheet as below for BEC Higher!:) > Maybe it will be of some help to you,as well! > > Your responses might include grammatical accuracy,good range of > vacabulary, > organisation,use of appropriate language and spelling. > > Use sequencers to organise your ideas clearly, > demonstrate a range of vocabulary by not repeating a word when an > alternative is available. > > For your self-evaluation: > 1 Do you show a clear understanding of the task? > 2 Is there an appropriate introduction and conclusion? > 3 Are your ideas well-organised and logically ordered? > 4 Is appropriate signposting and linking language used? > 5 Do you develop ideas rather than repeat them? > 6 Are the ideas clearly expressed and easy to understand? > 7 Do you speak in a clear and natural manner? > 8 Is the essay of an appropriate length? > > There's another person you can turn to:Eduardo Rocha Rodrigue! > He's an old active member from Brazil but busy researching and > finishing his PH.D.in Illinois,UIUC at present.He had to pass the Exam > to do his research,so he should have a fresh memory as how to get a > highest grade possible...;) (he's a perfectionist like you and pablo! > LOL) > > His e-mail:[email protected] <e-mail%[email protected]> > Good luck on your essays! > Best, > Pln > On Aug 17, 8:20 pm, Elham Moazzen <[email protected]> wrote: > > Thank you dear Simone; > > > > I have corrected the previous essay taking into account some internet > > vegetarian sources ;) Here it is: > > > > Today, vegetarian diet has gained extreme popularity all over the globe. > > Many people have substituted their meat-based diet with its meat-free > > counterparts containing nuts, beans, seeds, fruit and vegetables. For > sure, > > there are certain reasons why they follow a vegetarian diet. > > > > First and foremost, vegetarian dishes are healthier than meat-based ones. > > this is mainly due to their less fat and calories which reduce the > > likelihood of suffering from heart disease. Moreover, their high fibre > > content facilitates the digestion process. As a result, it minimizes > bowel > > problems. Furthermore, animal-human disease mainly transmits through > > different kinds of meat so vegetarians are less likely to get > > infected.Secondly, vegetarian diet is helpful for helthy weight loss. Its > > low amount of fat prevents obesity which meat eaters generally suffer to > a > > great extent. A further advatnage is that a vegetarian diet is cheaper > than > > eating meat. Finally, some people believe that it is wrong to kill > animals > > either in terms of their religious beliefs or their own personal > philosoghy. > > > > Nevertheless, it is clear that there are some disadvantages. > > vegetarians lack a lot of the vitamis and minerals that are present in > meat, > > such as vitamin B12 or iron, or calcium if dairy products are not > included > > in the diet. There is also the social problem of not being able to have > food > > available at parties and restaurants. > > > > Overall, I personally believe that human's body requires all substances > > included in vegetables and various meat. > > Therefore, it is not reasonable to absolutely omit any of them. Instead, > one > > should strike a balance between vegetarian > > and meat-based diets in order live healthier. > > > > On Mon, Aug 17, 2009 at 2:58 PM, Elham Moazzen <[email protected] > >wrote: > > > > > > > > > > > > > Dear all, > > > I will at least send an essay a day to the group, for 1 month in order > to > > > improve my writing skills for IELTS academin module. > > > I will be grateful if you extend my vocabulary by your proposed > > > ideas and point my mistakes out. > > > > > *Many people have changed from a mainly meat-based diet to a vegetarian > > > one in recent years. * > > > *What are the reasons for this and to what extent do you consider it a > > > sensible option?* > > > > > In recent years, people have increasingly prefered to consume more > > > vegetables in their daily meals. Nearly, > > > meat-based diets have replaced to a great extent with vegetarian ones > in > > > many areas of the world. there are > > > many reasons why people follow a vegetarian diet. > > > > > Firstly, some people are againts killing animals. This is either due to > > > their religious obligations which prohibit > > > them from harming other living creatures or their personal philosophy > so as > > > to preserve different animal species > > > and cease them to suffer. Secondly, according to scientific findings, > > > vegetables are much healthier than meat, > > > especially the red meat, in terms of the fibre and low fat they > constitue > > > which prevents various bowel problems > > > and heart diseases. Moreover, gaining a balanced weight is evidently a > > > direct result of consuming more vegetables > > > compared to obesity and overweight problems caused by meat products. > > > Eventually, foods consisting of just vegetables > > > are less expensive thus they are more affordable as daily dishes. > > > > > Despite, a totally vegetarian diet has some disadvantages. Vegetables > lack > > > some vitamins and minerals which are > > > necessary for brain and body development and resistance to various > > > diseases. For instance, the calcium provided by > > > diary products plays an essential role in bone strength and growth. On > the > > > other hand, people who only follow a pure > > > vegetarian diet has difficulties in parties and restaurants which > usually > > > serve mixed dishes. > > > > > Overall, I personally believe that human's body requires all substances > > > included in vegetables and different types of meat. > > > Therefore, it is not reasonable to absolutely omit any of them. > Instead, > > > one should strike a balance between vegetables > > > and meat taking into account the consumption of more vegetables. > > > > > -- > > > > > "When you know what you want,and you want it badly enough,you'll find a > way > > > to get it." > > > > > "Successful leaders have the courage to take action while others > hesitate." > > > > -- > > > > "When you know what you want,and you want it badly enough,you'll find a > way > > to get it." > > > > "Successful leaders have the courage to take action while others > hesitate."- Hide quoted text - > > > > - Show quoted text - > > > -- Simone --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "ESL Podcast". 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