So, now write out that sentence yourself. And say it out loud. A number of times. Then try to write it again from memory.
Scroll down to see the correction in red. My pleasure to help you!! Keep up the good work! --- On Thu, 9/17/09, [email protected] <[email protected]> wrote: From: [email protected] <[email protected]> Subject: [ESL Podcast] Re: What make you feel are alive? To: "Els" <[email protected]> Date: Thursday, September 17, 2009, 10:20 AM That's what I need!!! I need more than to be understood, I need to be as good as you are :) Thanks a bunch Master Chaya :) Regards EckmanPowered by Telkomsel BlackBerry®From: Chaya Eitan <[email protected]> Date: Thu, 17 Sep 2009 10:09:00 -0700 (PDT)To: <[email protected]>Subject: [ESL Podcast] Re: What make you feel are alive? Here goes: I think what makes people feel alive is when they still have hope. Hope is not permanent. It changes, depending on the situation and conditions people find themselves in. As for me, my one big hope is to become fluent in English! Okay, Eckman?? But I do have to say that I understood everything you wrote; and that is what is important - to be understood! Chaya --- On Thu, 9/17/09, [email protected] <[email protected]> wrote: From: [email protected] <[email protected]> Subject: [ESL Podcast] Re: What make you feel are alive? To: "Els" <[email protected]> Date: Thursday, September 17, 2009, 7:47 AM Hi Ed Chaya and all, I think what make people feel alive are when they still have a hope. A hope is not permanent, it changes, depend on situation and condition. Like me, for now I have a hope, one big hope, to fluent my english! Chaya, Would you please correct my sentence above so I will know to use the proper sentence to express my thought. Thank you in advance. Goodnight Eckman Powered by Telkomsel BlackBerry®From: Eduardo Costa <[email protected]> Date: Thu, 17 Sep 2009 10:20:37 -0300To: ESLPODCAST Study Group<[email protected]>Subject: [ESL Podcast] What make you feel are alive? Hello people. More one topic to discuss: What make you feel u are alive? Take care Ed. --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "ESL Podcast". To post to this group, send email to: [email protected] or just reply this message For invite your friends, visit: http://groups.google.com/group/eslpodcast/members_invite Know how help us, visit this FAQ at: http://groups.google.com/group/eslpodcast/web/frequently-asked-questions -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---
