Greetings from the Professor of Lurkology,

What a Great Flyer . . . thanks for taking 'that' beast on, Mike.  I 
followed your directive and scanned it for editing targets, then made the 
edits and have attached the current version, done by me.  Most of the few 
corrections were parens, changed to left paired versions, and I bailed the 
possessive forms, for the LUG.  It could go either way, but I think it 
might look cleaner as just plural  USERS.

Before the final version is printed, have you seen the Tux on the Free 
LINUX COMMAND CARD download?  Tux is sitting on a small patch of ice, next 
to a small pile of snowballs.  He is also holding one and wearing what can 
only be described as an <innocent look>.  The Windows logo, complete with 
snowball hole, is nearby. . . . .    Too Radical ??  Too Confrontational 
??  Too snotty ?? (yeah, so?)

It might be subtle enough to add as the Tux bird on the folder, but even 
without 'that' change,  WHAT A GREAT FLYER!!


Rob      (not that Rob, the other one)


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p.s.  -- I didn't Reply, since that would have had Two versions of a Star 
Office doc grinding through the various mail servers.

EUGLUG-Flyer.sdw




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