Hmm' I really like the penguin, it looks more muscular and less like a plush toy, which is good. too bad it's facing away from the viewer; the bumbershoot doesn't do too much for me in either version.
Maybe turn the penguin towards the viewer and make the umbrella a little more vertical! It's cool, and a few more iterations ought to put it into the realm of having entire sweatshops dedicated to turning out EUGLUG T-shirts for the adoring masses; we'll live like kings! or not. http://www.efn.org/~laprice ( Community, Cooperation, Consensus http://www.opn.org ( Openness to serendipity, make mistakes http://www.efn.org/~laprice/poems ( but learn from them.(carpe fructus ludi) http://allie.office.efn.org/phpwiki/index.php?OregonPublicNetworking
