On Sun, 2008-06-22 at 13:11 +0200, Martin Sourada wrote:
> On Sun, 2008-06-22 at 02:50 -0700, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote:
> > Martin Sourada a écrit : 
> > > Good, perhaps the shadow might be a little better. Can you try using
> > > similar shadow to that in package-x-generic?
> > >   
> > > 
> > It should display fine now using blur and gradient on shadow area.
> > > I'd definitely set it to brown. The grey-brown combination looks a
> > > little strange. As for the outline width, I'd keep 0.75 px and rather
> > > modify the shape a little to fit into pixel grid with vertical lines.
> > >   
> > Outline set to 0.75 px and switched to brown colour.
> > 
> Definitely looks better. To me it looks nearly OK. I only noticed that
> it's still not perfectly aligned to pixel grid (or at least it seems so,
> I haven't checked the SVGs yet) - vertical lines seem a little blurry.
> You might also want to add more contrast between outlines and fills in
> the smaller icons to better define the shape.

OK, I went ahead and fixed the 48x48 and 16x16 versions. As I suspected,
the 48x48 one was about 0.5 px off in x direction, so moving the drawer
a little to the left helped to fix the alignment. I also did some
further fixes to problems I noticed in the SVG and/or improvements:
 
 * added gradient to outlines so that at the bottom of the icon the
contrast between outline and fill is still non-zero
 * slightly edited the shadow as I liked it
 * minor fix to cases fills size and handles size/position
 * played a little with the outlines width

Would be good if you made similar fixes to the other sizes (22x22 and
32x32; 24x24 can be created in gimp from 22x22 by adding 1px wide
transparent border to it). 

Martin

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